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He feels a flurry of a breeze, A warm zephyr wriggling and writhing Amongst the newly formed oval leaves Of a forest of samara laden birch trees. It's like a melody for him. Can it lead him to the one who left him? Where will he find her? Where is she hiding? She is his all, his only tender sweetheart. Alas it was his fault he lost her. All began with a misunderstanding. But the icy cold north wind was blowing. Snow fell and windows were covered with ice. And he did nothing to bring in some warmth. One day she left him in the cold.

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Date: 4/12/2021 1:29:00 PM
So sad Victor, I hope he finds her and treats her right, that the flame of love will reignite... Belle
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Date: 4/5/2021 5:56:00 PM
Only those we love can really hurt us. All it takes is the wrong word at the wrong time to really cut deeply.. Deep enough to drive the one we love away forever. Good job here as always Victor. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/2/2021 9:58:00 PM
wow, poem, with great imagery and depth of heartfelt emotion. Great write, Victor. Have a great Easter.
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Date: 4/2/2021 1:19:00 PM
Hi Victor, You have penned such a sad yet well-written write. What was the misunderstanding about? Off to read part two-Alexis
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Date: 4/2/2021 1:45:00 AM
Oh, so sad, Victor..
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Date: 4/1/2021 4:26:00 PM
A sad write, Victor. A misunderstanding that went to far. Hope you have a great night :)
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Date: 3/31/2021 11:51:00 AM
Emotive and expressive work. The ladies have to have some warmth and understanding for sure. A very nice work expressing those emotions. Your presence at my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 3/31/2021 9:19:00 AM
Nice descriptive in another of your emotive poems. Well done, Victor.
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Date: 3/31/2021 8:14:00 AM
We often later regret the way we treat our loved ones, Victor. I hope he finds her again, but he may have to change his ways to keep her. A beautiful but sad poem. Have a blessed Easter, Victor! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/31/2021 7:55:00 AM
Emotion and imagery!
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Date: 3/30/2021 12:41:00 PM
- The art of understanding each other can be difficult, Victor - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2021 11:07:00 AM
Hello Victor, I do not blame her. Because he did not treat her right. Happy Easter. Enjoy your day my frrend/
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Date: 3/30/2021 10:27:00 AM
A melancholy poem with powerful images, revealing the heartache of a love gone mysteriously wrong. Beautifully written, Victor.
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Date: 3/30/2021 5:16:00 AM
Poignant write, Victor. Ruminating in sorrow. Love can do that.
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