Searching

Stars
calmly
live in space;
hiding within
all constellations;
seeking them out
takes some work
from the
eyes.

skyspacestarsninette

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Gary Bateman

May 25, 2015 at 7:46 AM

ML, A simply marvelous write here!! I've not yet tried the "Ninette" poetic format. I will need to do this. What you say about the "Stars" is quite true!! Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser

May 25, 2015 at 9:29 AM

I've always loved the heavens; thanks Gary.

Funom Makama

April 28, 2015 at 8:52 AM

Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7

M. L. Kiser

April 30, 2015 at 1:01 PM

Thanks so much, Funom.

Mario De Paz

April 20, 2015 at 1:56 PM

Simple and attracting. So star watching is to my mind

M. L. Kiser

April 20, 2015 at 2:30 PM

Isn't it thrilling to watch the heavenly bodies, swirling out in the deep sky? I am very glad that you stopped by to read and comment.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

April 20, 2015 at 7:40 AM

Lovely short verse that tantalizes my eyes and leave me the breathe of fresh air.. :)!//olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser

April 20, 2015 at 8:26 AM

I am glad and thank you.

Emile Pinet

April 19, 2015 at 8:36 AM

Sweet, short and filled with imagery. The simple words say a lot and convey meaning within their reading. Your delivery and flow are good, carrying your thoughts to completion within this structure. Emile. #7

M. L. Kiser

April 20, 2015 at 8:26 AM

Thank you so much for the feedback, Emile.

Judy Konos

April 18, 2015 at 11:35 AM

We give you a hearty AYE - Loved it...thanks ...

M. L. Kiser

April 20, 2015 at 8:27 AM

Many thanks.

Sara Kendrick

April 18, 2015 at 6:27 AM

Interesting work..You star gazer..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

M. L. Kiser

April 20, 2015 at 8:27 AM

Glad to hear from you again, Sara; thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

April 17, 2015 at 10:55 PM

How alone we would feel if we looked up and there were no stars. Exploring the universe either by telescope or by satellite or space voyages is where our thrilling future lies and your poem expresses that curiosity humankind has always had with the stars. A great Ninette M.L.!

M. L. Kiser

April 20, 2015 at 8:28 AM

So glad that you enjoyed it, Connie; thanks for dropping by again.