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Stars calmly live in space; hiding within all constellations; seeking them out takes some work from the eyes.

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Gary Bateman

Date: 5/25/2015 7:46:00 AM

ML, A simply marvelous write here!! I've not yet tried the "Ninette" poetic format. I will need to do this. What you say about the "Stars" is quite true!! Best Always, Gary

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/25/2015 9:29:00 AM

I've always loved the heavens; thanks Gary.

Funom Makama

Date: 4/28/2015 8:52:00 AM

Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/30/2015 1:01:00 PM

Thanks so much, Funom.

Mario De Paz

Date: 4/20/2015 1:56:00 PM

Simple and attracting. So star watching is to my mind

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 2:30:00 PM

Isn't it thrilling to watch the heavenly bodies, swirling out in the deep sky? I am very glad that you stopped by to read and comment.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/20/2015 7:40:00 AM

Lovely short verse that tantalizes my eyes and leave me the breathe of fresh air.. :)!//olive eloisa

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:26:00 AM

I am glad and thank you.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/19/2015 8:36:00 AM

Sweet, short and filled with imagery. The simple words say a lot and convey meaning within their reading. Your delivery and flow are good, carrying your thoughts to completion within this structure. Emile. #7

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for the feedback, Emile.

Judy Konos

Date: 4/18/2015 11:35:00 AM

We give you a hearty AYE - Loved it...thanks ...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:27:00 AM

Many thanks.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2015 6:27:00 AM

Interesting work..You star gazer..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:27:00 AM

Glad to hear from you again, Sara; thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/17/2015 10:55:00 PM

How alone we would feel if we looked up and there were no stars. Exploring the universe either by telescope or by satellite or space voyages is where our thrilling future lies and your poem expresses that curiosity humankind has always had with the stars. A great Ninette M.L.!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:28:00 AM

So glad that you enjoyed it, Connie; thanks for dropping by again.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/17/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tasha; I'm glad you stopped by to read and comment.

Tasha Taylor

Date: 4/17/2015 4:17:00 PM

This is a beautiful image! I love how simple you made it. Great write! I can't wait to read more of your work! <3 Tash

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/20/2015 8:29:00 AM

Thank you Tasha.