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Shadorma

A Shadorma is of Spanish origin and consists of a 6 line stanza using the following syllable counts: 3/5/3/3/7/5. There is no rhyme scheme.

Your first step begins the journey of many more to come awaiting discovery on your path to truth. (Shadorma) July 29, 2018

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/29/2018 1:25:00 PM

Well said, Emile! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/29/2018 12:39:00 PM

Beautiful, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Sand Blown

Date: 7/29/2018 9:37:00 AM

peace is every step it turns the endless path to joy (thich nhat hanh)

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2018 9:56:00 AM

Thanks Sand, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/29/2018 9:26:00 AM

Hello Emile, I saw your new poem here using the Spanish "Shadorma" format. I will have to try this format out myself. It looks to be quite interesting. Your message here in "Search For Truth" is both direct and full of obvious wisdom. The "first step" starts our life journey. Superbly-Done!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Emile Pinet
Date: 7/29/2018 9:55:00 AM

Thanks so much Gary, I welcome your input my friend, Emile.