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Search For Tomorrow

I lost the love of my life In the secret storm of our romance Looking for a guiding light For our love teeters on the Edge of night As the world turns I will search for love tomorrow Among the dark shadows of despair Soap Opera Titles Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sian St John

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/16/2018 6:55:00 PM

Touching, crisp and profoundly emotional. This poem delivers a great deal in brevity form, which I always like. I enjoyed reading it very much. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/16/2018 7:10:00 PM

Thanks CayCay

William Woods

Date: 10/11/2018 6:01:00 AM

Clever and well written!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/11/2018 6:35:00 PM

Thanks William

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/6/2018 8:44:00 PM

A fun take on the challenge, Timothy. Well done.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/6/2018 11:03:00 PM

Thanks friend

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/5/2018 7:56:00 PM

Beautifully sad imagery and poignant emotions adorn your lost love poem, Timothy. Great use of the soap titles which melt effortlessly in the weave of your evocative words.. By the way, I spot 6 soap titles.. awesome! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/5/2018 8:03:00 PM

Thank you Miss Susan greatly appreciated! :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/5/2018 12:53:00 AM

nice, amazingly penned- love is lost on the riot of darkness in stormy night of life but for tomorrow morning the love hopefully will come with morning shining breeze to touch the graceful heavenly soul.= nice

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/5/2018 4:12:00 AM

Thank you Mahtab