11/19/23
Sonnet - Ku-Ku
Fourth Place
Contest by Charles Messina.
Original sonnet written on 9/27/23
Search For Entity SHM I care, I SEARCH FOR my REAL ENTITY Throughout life like others, I was bound to pass through agitation and serenity. All hindrances - obstacles to surpass. Enjoyed childhood, studied working hard. Accessed success ! Blessed to reach on top. Sometimes life ran smooth, sometimes faced hazard. Sometimes endured failure : Effort went on flop. In last phase achievements turned meaningless. Post life entrance in a different stage. How to play my role ? Sinking in darkness. Book of After Life just showing blank page. I care, I search for my identity WHETHER ME ENTWINED WITH DIVINITY. success or failure, achievements turned meaningless in last phase of life. I search for real entity, whether me entwined with divinity.
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