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11/19/23

Sonnet - Ku-Ku

Fourth Place

Contest by Charles Messina.

Original sonnet written on 9/27/23

Search For Entity SHM I care, I SEARCH FOR my REAL ENTITY Throughout life like others, I was bound to pass through agitation and serenity. All hindrances - obstacles to surpass. Enjoyed childhood, studied working hard. Accessed success ! Blessed to reach on top. Sometimes life ran smooth, sometimes faced hazard. Sometimes endured failure : Effort went on flop. In last phase achievements turned meaningless. Post life entrance in a different stage. How to play my role ? Sinking in darkness. Book of After Life just showing blank page. I care, I search for my identity WHETHER ME ENTWINED WITH DIVINITY. success or failure, achievements turned meaningless in last phase of life. I search for real entity, whether me entwined with divinity.

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Date: 1/2/2024 7:46:00 AM
Oops! Anisha, a lovely write. Unfortunately, you had too many syllables in your sonnet. Happy New Year, dear friend.
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Date: 11/19/2023 6:06:00 PM
such deep and inspiring, remind me some days ago, bravo poétesse yann
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thanks.Blessings
Date: 11/19/2023 5:34:00 PM
a delicately woven piece of thought - nicely expressed
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 11/19/2023 7:12:00 PM
Thanks and blessings.

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