Seamen Shantey

Skinny-dipping with you is a thrill
For a man who is over the hill
But just one squiggly squirm
From a small dangling worm
And a fish will dart in for the kill!

A Sperm Whale with a mouthful of krill
Can swallow more than you ever will
Only octopus arms
Could adore all your charms
But for you, this is only a drill

30.VII.19

(as per Jan's request, written for
Tania Kitchin's Two Sea-themed Limerick poetry contest)
Syllables Per Line:  9 9 6 6 9 0 9 9 6 6 9 
Total # Syllables: 78
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Cunningham Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 2:14 AM
How bawdy limericks' should bring written, congrats on your win Rico. You've put me off skinny dipping. Tom
Moorman Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Rico, thanks for reminding me of the three great years I spent in Hawaii. I spent many hours on the sands of Waikiki and enjoyed every moment. You limerick is one that brings a smile to the gloomiest face.
Mcgee Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Congrats on your win with this cute shantey.
Gauthier Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Congrats on your win, Rico. Well done.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 6:27 PM
I am SO SO delighted you entered the contest Rico, bawdy at its best lol:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Rico, I enjoyed your bawdy limerick, it is hilarious! Congratulations on your winning placement!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 7, 2019 at 10:06 AM
You are a funny fun guy!
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 1:36 AM
OMG Rico this is hilarious - am adding this bawdy gem to my faves lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
July 31, 2019 at 5:55 PM
Mahalo for the inspiration! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 11:10 PM
Hello Rico … a typical seaman's shanty. Humorous and spicy - thanks Mate - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 11:11 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
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