Sealed Fate

Gun smoke
Shot bloke

In head
Now dead

In jail 
No bail

Oh dang!
Will hang 

Then go 
Below

To hell
Cartel

Jail break
Gang make

Ride horse
With force

Fell off
Self scoff
 
Snake bit
Swift hit

Now lie
And die

Too late
Sealed fate

Now at
Hells gate.

       26.07.21

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 8/30/2021 2:44:00 AM
Enjoyed your humorous footle, Emilia. I’ve never written in this form, I’ll have to try it sometime. Hugs, John
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Date: 8/30/2021 9:23:00 AM
Thank you John, I love this form though I think there are some different variations of it. Hope you do give it a try sometime and I look forward to reading it if you do. Hugs, Emilia : )
Date: 7/28/2021 3:28:00 PM
Lol, you havent lost your touch Emilia. Tom
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Date: 7/29/2021 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Tom, these are fun to write. Will see where the next one takes me lol. Emilia.
Date: 7/27/2021 5:34:00 PM
Hi emilia.welcome back.not seen you on here for ages.missed reading your footles.simon.:)
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Date: 7/28/2021 1:59:00 PM
Hi Simon and thank you. not been on for about 6 months. Hope to be around more. Emilia. : )
Date: 7/26/2021 3:16:00 PM
Emilia, these are great footles and they tell a story! I enjoyed reading your work! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/28/2021 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim, Footles are one of my favourite forms and enjoy writing them. Emilia.
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