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Sealed Fate

Gun smoke Shot bloke In head Now dead In jail No bail Oh dang! Will hang Then go Below To hell Cartel Jail break Gang make Ride horse With force Fell off Self scoff Snake bit Swift hit Now lie And die Too late Sealed fate Now at Hells gate. 26.07.21

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John Gondolf

Date: 8/30/2021 2:44:00 AM

Enjoyed your humorous footle, Emilia. I’ve never written in this form, I’ll have to try it sometime. Hugs, John

Emilia James
Date: 8/30/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thank you John, I love this form though I think there are some different variations of it. Hope you do give it a try sometime and I look forward to reading it if you do. Hugs, Emilia : )

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/28/2021 3:28:00 PM

Lol, you havent lost your touch Emilia. Tom

Emilia James
Date: 7/29/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Tom, these are fun to write. Will see where the next one takes me lol. Emilia.

Simon Hamill

Date: 7/27/2021 5:34:00 PM

Hi emilia.welcome back.not seen you on here for ages.missed reading your footles.simon.:)

Emilia James
Date: 7/28/2021 1:59:00 PM

Hi Simon and thank you. not been on for about 6 months. Hope to be around more. Emilia. : )

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/26/2021 3:16:00 PM

Emilia, these are great footles and they tell a story! I enjoyed reading your work! Blessings, Kim M

Emilia James
Date: 7/28/2021 1:56:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim, Footles are one of my favourite forms and enjoy writing them. Emilia.