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Seahorses - Why


Seahorses...Why?


Dear Mother Nature woke one day,
   and looked around with a sly smile,
surveyed her Earth, both land, and sea,
   then paused to think for quite a while.

She beamed with joy with her new plan,
   to think outside the box, create
a wonder for her earthly seas...
   a creature that would not equate.

Strange, tiny fish that swim upright,
   sway like a plant that swirls and flails;
propel themselves by mini fins,
   and anchor with prehensile tails.

With equine heads, extended snouts
   to suck in plankton and shrimp brine;
and so unlike most normal fish,
   no mouths or stomachs to define.

Must constantly eat food to keep
   up energy, or they will die.
A gift that helps them spot their prey...
   can steer their vision from each eye.

Romantic will their courtship be;
   eight-hour dances, pairs will spin
close, side by side and joining tails;
   then breeding offspring will begin.

Monogamous, some mate for life,*
   and rarer too, the males bear young
from eggs embedded in their pouch
   from which in time, babies are flung.

Dear Mother Nature laughs with joy!
   Her new creation will defy
the rules for creatures of the sea...
   for humans to...then question...why...

...come up with reasons for her plan...
        not knowing, just...because she can.


Sandra M. Haight

~10th Place~
Premiere Contest: Seahorses
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Judged: 05/08/2018

*There are mixed commentaries on whether Seahorses really mate for life.  
  Some say yes, others say only some species do, others report that they 
  do not.
 
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Gentile Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:48 AM
And Congrats to you Sandra. I love how you wove so many of the characteristics into a beautiful flowing poem, Well Done xx00
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Thank you very much, Mike, for your congrats and lovely comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Warrior Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Congrats!!! Sandra...a fun contest...thanks to Julia...love & light...^WW^
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:10 PM
Thank you so much, ^WW^, for your visit and congrats! Sandra
Ward Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 12:53 AM
Why indeed about the mystery of seahorse creation. It's not mystifying about why your poem made it to the top ten of my winners' list, though. Congratulations, Sandra.
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much, Julia, for the inspiring contest and for my nice placement and congrats. It was a fun write for me, and I enjoyed participating. Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Sandra. Well done.
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Thank you, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Gentry Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Congratulations on your win. Very informative.
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank you very much, Susan! Hugs, Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 5:56 PM
Wonderful write Sandra. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Thank very much, Sian. Hugs, Sandra
Richards Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 5:35 PM
You never let us down. Always top notch poetry and time well spend! Well done, Sandra !!
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Thank you so much, Carrie, for your visit and supportive comments and congrats. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Roper Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 3:41 PM
this is a marvelous write, Sandra congratulation on your win !
Haight Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Thank you, Eve! It was fun! Hugs, Sandra
Tripp Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 8:52 PM
Great informative poem, Sandra and written with such style! Very awesome job. Love that ending as well.
Haight Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Thank you, Rhoda, it was a fun poem to work out. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it. Hugs, Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2018 at 1:05 PM
wow, there is much here I had no idea about!! Sure hope this gets a win. It was very well thought out and delivered!
Haight Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Thanks, Andrea! It was fun write. Hugs, Sandra
Krampe Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Sandra, this is fabulous. A very enjoyable poem; I will always think of your poem when somebody mentions a seahorse :)
Haight Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thanks, Agnes! This was a fun one to write! I am pleased that you enjoyed it and really appreciate your lovely comments! Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Awesome spin on the challenge, Sandra. Extremely well done.
Haight Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Line, thank you so much for your uplifting comment. Not sure if this is what Julia is looking for, but my muse led me all the way! I appreciate your support so much! Hugs, Sandra
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