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Seagulls Cried

Early morn, the shore I walked
Bladderwrack lay strewn.
Rockpools, there to be explored
Adorned with windblown spume.

High above seagulls cried
Plaintive, their refrain
Echoing far across the sky,
As though a soul in pain.

Out on the horizon
The sun began to rise,
Vermillion hues of many shades
Appeared before my eyes.

A crystal mass on the shore
The man'o'war lay dying,
Laments above, I heard for it
For seagulls still, were crying.









PREMIERE CONTEST NO 105,any theme,
Any form,max of 25 lines - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Brian Strand
17/10/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/18/2017 9:49:00 PM
Love the mood of your poem. Congrats on your well deserved win, Gary.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/19/2017 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Line :)
Date: 10/18/2017 9:43:00 PM
Nice win Gary loved this write so well done!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/19/2017 4:58:00 AM
Thank you John :)
Date: 10/18/2017 1:03:00 PM
Returning to congratulate you Gary on your fine placement with your beautiful poem.
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/18/2017 2:04:00 PM
How kind Susan, thank you :)
Date: 10/17/2017 7:51:00 PM
A beautiful write Gary. Lovely and lively imagery. I really enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest!
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/18/2017 5:31:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)
Date: 10/17/2017 3:13:00 PM
Ok, so now I know it's kelp, thanks Gary, learned a new word today. By the way, great write...
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Charlie :)
Date: 10/17/2017 2:27:00 PM
Fabulous poem! I had to look up bladderwrack :) my best to you for the contest!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 10/17/2017 2:57:00 PM
absolutely :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 10/17/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thank you Maureen, bladderwrack's a great word isn't it :)

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