Seafoam Green

her eyes
were
seafoam green

they pierced
the night
in one
fell swoop

their glare
left folk
speechless

a feline grace
like no other
haunting

unmistakably
unforgettable
and like the wind

and it just vanished
in the moonlight



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 8:52 AM
As a cat owner, had to fav this one; incredible.
Gauthier Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Thank you, ML, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.
Kitchin Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Nicely done Line, enjoyed!
Gauthier Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 11:50 AM
Thanks, Tania. Most appreciated.
Mcguire Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:09 PM
Wonderful Poem, I have to chuckle though, Seafoam is also an additive that goes in a boat as a gas additive. Ill think of your poem when I see that bottle. :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 11:19 PM
LOL - that is too funny, thanks for that pretty picture, Timothy.
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 5:57 PM
what a nice description and mysterious how they disappeared in moonlight
Gauthier Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 8:23 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Andrea.
Mcgee Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 5:38 PM
I loved the simple elegance of your poem. Nice. Jeanne
Gauthier Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 5:51 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Jeanne. Most appreciated.
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