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An AI-generated picture, via ArtyNab fb page – June 2025.

A Suzette Swan Arc poem. See the article:

Oscillation – A Defining Feature of Suzette Swan Arc Poetry | PoetrySoup.com


 

a forgotten hope chest – linen s!t!i!t!c!h!e!d with love by candlelight c r u m b l e now to the mere touch— past companionship … forgotten s n a t c h e s of conversation fill the a i r mingling with my t e a r s… regret never far away— a childhood dream in the c*a*r*v*e*d initials in the door jamb – the door permanently removed to let the departed soul escape – now weathered by exposure to the salt s e a a i r beyond ThaT I can TasTe in my T e a r s the equally weathered picture [FRAME] against the f a i g paint l k n above the hope chest had encompassed our hopes o u on our wedding day l d now as ephemeral as the s c u d d i n g c s above the r e s t l e s s ocean as I look down at my wedding dress now yellowed to the colour of the moss b.e.t.w.e.e.n the flagstones of the hallway your M*Dness now resonates with method – an escape from the inevitable suffering of your illness weathered moments lost out to sea with your departure— I set your memory f r e e …

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Date: 6/12/2025 11:29:00 AM
I love the idea of setting painful memories free. A super example of your Suzette Swan Arc. I enjoyed the article and your detailed explanation and examples. Congratulations on your top sin Suzette! :)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/12/2025 1:03:00 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Linda. I am flattered by your remarks about my article. Bless you, Su x
Date: 6/10/2025 5:40:00 PM
You changed the title to another one! I like it, Suzette. I'm quickly becoming a real fan, <3
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/10/2025 9:33:00 PM
It was written, using a current prompts, but like this title better. Thanks for noticing, Paige. :)
Date: 6/9/2025 3:39:00 PM
So much thought has clearly gone into this - "s!t!i!t!c!h!e!d" is my favourite visual - very inventive :)
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/9/2025 8:57:00 PM
Sometimes a poem lends itself to being creative (for better or worse). Thank you for the visit, DD :)
Date: 6/8/2025 6:04:00 PM
This is painful- a beauty in the pain, however. You write with a true feeling and lovely pen. I was swept away,
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/8/2025 7:30:00 PM
On Father's Day, it will be the 1 year anniversary of a dear friend's passing. My mind turns to his memory this time of year. It is not my usual write. Thank you for reading and your kind comment, Paige.
Date: 6/8/2025 12:56:00 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love this one... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun day writing away...............
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Suzette Richards
Date: 6/8/2025 7:32:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and complement, Paula.

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