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Sea Star

Awash by ripple of night's waves the glittering starfish drifts like an open flower on clay-- its plump flesh, a reddish lip enchanting two lovers' soft kiss through a glide of dusky sand. Night Creatures: nette onclaud Juaneco T posted 1.18.2015 No. 4--Starfish

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Date: 1/24/2015 6:24:00 AM
Splendid winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2015 12:56:00 PM
Wow.. This winning write is captivating!
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Date: 1/21/2015 11:30:00 PM
A perfect one Juaneco,congrats on the win ...huggs
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Date: 1/21/2015 7:54:00 AM
Amazing, Juaneco! I love your romantic beach scene...congrats...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/20/2015 10:21:00 PM
Very lovely write on sea creatures Juaneco,, Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 1/20/2015 3:34:00 PM
Impressed by your romantic sea star, Juaneco. Lovely opening and closing lines. #7 Congratulations on your win. // paul
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Date: 1/20/2015 2:28:00 PM
divine imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:37:00 PM
I'm a sucker for sea creatures as they can bring a hint of romance on a tropical scene. This is amazing!
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