Juaneco Torrente Poet Verse

Sea Star

Awash by ripple of night's waves
the glittering starfish drifts
like an open flower on clay--
its plump flesh, a reddish lip
enchanting two lovers' soft kiss
through a glide of dusky sand.


Night Creatures: nette onclaud
Juaneco T posted 1.18.2015
No. 4--Starfish

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Sara Kendrick January 24, 2015 at 6:24 AM Splendid winning work..Congrats..Sara

Kayod5 Kayode January 21, 2015 at 11:30 PM A perfect one Juaneco,congrats on the win ...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 21, 2015 at 7:54 AM Amazing, Juaneco! I love your romantic beach scene...congrats...hugs, Rhonda

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 20, 2015 at 10:21 PM Very lovely write on sea creatures Juaneco,, Congrats on ur win!

Paul Callus January 20, 2015 at 3:34 PM Impressed by your romantic sea star, Juaneco. Lovely opening and closing lines. #7 Congratulations on your win. // paul

Jan Allison January 20, 2015 at 2:28 PM divine imagery many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carly Lalion January 20, 2015 at 12:37 PM I'm a sucker for sea creatures as they can bring a hint of romance on a tropical scene. This is amazing!