I Am Anaya Poet Footle

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1489 Poetry Contest
Sponsor Brian Strand
3rd Place

Sea Star

fame walk
star mock 

sand bar         
sea star

five limbs
five glims

tube feet
replete

feed on
plankton

plankton
hang ten

landed
stranded

off shore
dry sore

starfish
wet wish

sun lights
last rites

bit dust
star crust

high tide
revived

swell waves
God saves

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Duke Beaufort July 27, 2026 at 12:36 PM Anaya, cute and fun to read.We give you 5 stars!!! ending smiles!!

Karen Croft July 21, 2026 at 2:15 AM love it! I Am Anaya July 22, 2026 at 7:08 AM Tyvm, Karen! Blessings

Bj Legros Kelley July 21, 2026 at 12:57 AM Oh, I love this Anaya! I miss seeing starfish, they are beautiful <3 This is a fave for me, a star! I Am Anaya July 22, 2026 at 7:07 AM Tyvm, BJ! It's amazing how colorful these spieces in different origins. I appreciate the new fave, *poem. Blessings

Paige Hind July 19, 2026 at 11:01 PM lovely, Anaya! I Am Anaya July 20, 2026 at 9:22 PM Ty. Paige! Appreciate it. Blessings

Sam Kauffman July 17, 2026 at 12:21 PM Anaya, in this footle is the story of life, death, resurrection and new life through the metaphor of a christening by the sea and God's waves of love! Really lovely and so well done! Beautiful metaphoric images. If for a contest, best wishes for a win! Sending you blessings! I Am Anaya July 17, 2026 at 3:30 PM God's creatures are spared, by His divine intervention, this an example, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the significance! Recieved! Ty, Sam, singer, poetess, & God's child~

Yann Rolland July 15, 2026 at 10:33 PM so creative poem, with words who sing, enjoyed I Am Anaya July 16, 2026 at 6:13 AM Pleased you enjoyed, Yann! Blessings