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Sea Sand and Sun

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At last it’s time to go and play and visit our beach hideaway to sunbathe Pure paradise, there are no crowds bright azure sky without white clouds just sunshine Our children paddle in the sea we picnic under a palm tree with sunshades Kid’s faces beam with pure delight, we’ve a beach barbecue tonight at sunset Wake to another golden morn Sweet birdies singing herald dawn watch sunrise Compounding The Verse Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 06/05/20

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/12/2021 12:04:00 PM

Great imagery, Jan, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 1/12/2021 12:22:00 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/24/2020 1:01:00 PM

Such a sweet entry Jan! Congratulations on your podium win! I love reading poems about children. You mastered this challenging form beautifully my friend! xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2020 5:37:00 PM

thanks Connie I was pleased to be on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2020 8:54:00 PM

A fun day at the beach, Congrats on your win Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2020 3:18:00 AM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) there were about 10 people on our local beach yesterday, people are observing lockdown very well and we have only had 1 new case in 5 days - i see some beaches in the Uk are jam packed ... lets see if they get a huge spike in a few weeks. Hope you are keeping well:-) hugs Jan xx

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/23/2020 6:33:00 PM

Sea, beaches and a lovely imagery of the happiness experienced gives such a soothing effect. Congratulations on your win Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2020 3:16:00 AM

thanks Aditi:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 5/23/2020 5:28:00 PM

Who doesn't love a tale of a sunny summer day? Excellent choice of a root word, and lovely knitting together a tale of a family at the shore. Congratulations, my friend ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:58:00 PM

Thanks John it was fun to write :-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 5/10/2020 6:01:00 PM

Compound verse is not easy to tackle, Jan, due to certain limitations, but you have done really well. Sea, sand and sun are so near and yet so far away!! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:58:00 PM

Thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/8/2020 1:05:00 AM

Hello Jan … it reads like paradise. A nice positive poem that we really need at this time - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:57:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay:-) I do try and be positive it helps:-) hugs Jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 5/7/2020 5:14:00 PM

This must be from memories Jan at the minute. Do you ever watch Four in a Bed

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:57:00 PM

Never seen 4 in a bed it sounds err interesting lol and we are not beach people either, just a fun poem for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/6/2020 4:24:00 PM

Hi Jan: I just loved the way you applied the stanzas. I envy you!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:56:00 PM

Pure fiction Ralph we are not beach holiday people and wouldn't have to travel to go to one as we have a lovely beach 5 mins from home:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 5/6/2020 2:32:00 PM

What a beautiful work of art here Jan. Great poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Mark I write the odd more sensible poem now and then lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 5/6/2020 2:26:00 PM

this is very beautifully painted Jan, really brightens up the soul wishing you a blessed week dear friend

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thanks Liam:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/6/2020 2:19:00 PM

jan - it's so refreshing to read such a delightful and uplifting poem! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 5/6/2020 1:39:00 PM

Oh, to be the first one in the water at Hanauma Bay after the lockdown ends! Imagine what it will be like after months of not being disturbed by humans! You chose the right subject, and the right words! Good luck! Aloha! Rico n.b. my Avatar is me snorkelling at Hanuama Bay.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:54:00 PM

My son learned to snorkel when he was in Taiwan.. doubt he will be doing it in our cold irish Sea!:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/6/2020 11:56:00 AM

Such a relaxing, fun flow! (I'm having a hard time coming up with something for this one!) Hope you have your beach vacation soon :)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/23/2020 5:52:00 PM

Thanks Michelle, we are not beach people at all, much prefer walking to sitting around in the sun:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/6/2020 9:20:00 AM

I feel peaceful reading this one. A slice of perfect. ;0)

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Rick I am glad you got a sense of calm reading the poem that's what I was trying to achieve:-) hugs Jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/6/2020 8:15:00 AM

This is such a gem, Jan. Loved every word. God bless you always. Gina

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2020 8:34:00 AM

Thanks Gina, hope you are keeping well:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/6/2020 7:34:00 AM

Sounds like bliss Jan, hopefully we'll get away later in the year, but who knows, might be going to the Costa Del Garden yet lol. Good luck Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 5/6/2020 7:52:00 AM

Deffo Costa del back garden for us too, any travel plans we had will not go ahead even if the lockdown is lifted here it may not be safe to go abroad, we do have a beach just five minutes walk away so we are very lucky, just stay safe my friend:-) hugs Jan xx