Sea Ripples

the sea swallowed the sun, and eructed ~ ripples lap the shore
19th February 2023 For JCB Brul's "A ripple to me 2" contest
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Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 5:38 PM
Interesting…a bit funny. Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:59 PM
a lovely one. Congrats
Buehler Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Imaginative and lovely, Jo. Congratulations on your win. :)
Rose  Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 9:34 AM
Ain't nature wonderful dear friend, congrats on your win, this is a beauty to behold
George Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 3:53 AM
After swallowing the sun, the sea belched causing waves of ripples that lap on the shore. Beautiful, Jo ! Congratulations on your win.
Sands Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Great one Jo!! :)
Andresen Avatar
February 19, 2023 at 5:12 AM
- Lovely, Jo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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