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Sea Ripples

the sea swallowed the sun, and eructed ~ ripples lap the shore
19th February 2023 For JCB Brul's "A ripple to me 2" contest

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Date: 2/21/2023 5:38:00 PM
Interesting…a bit funny. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/20/2023 3:59:00 PM
a lovely one. Congrats
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Date: 2/20/2023 11:02:00 AM
Imaginative and lovely, Jo. Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 2/20/2023 9:34:00 AM
Ain't nature wonderful dear friend, congrats on your win, this is a beauty to behold
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Date: 2/20/2023 3:53:00 AM
After swallowing the sun, the sea belched causing waves of ripples that lap on the shore. Beautiful, Jo ! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/19/2023 8:13:00 AM
Great one Jo!! :)
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Date: 2/19/2023 5:12:00 AM
- Lovely, Jo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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