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Sea of Roses

Enamoured with myself, I walk my garden path Where the grass grows tall Snapping off a long piece, a whistle So shrill the dogs howl Dandelions greet me Their sunny dispositions radiate hello How can I not make myself a dandelion crown? Can I not take what I own? Daisies dance - pleading pick me, pick me He loves you, he loves you not No worries, love I will pluck your petals until my answer comes up Scent pulls me farther along to a sea of roses at the edge Their heads held high, defiant to the waves crashing below Can I not pluck again? They are mine, are they not? I suck the pulsing red reminder That we own nothing but just us I try again, as they are mine! A snip, a blossom cupped in hand Cascading petals into nothingness A mockery of my intent Small acts land large on nondescript days Majestically humble sea of roses Here to teach and touch and love My ego in my pocket, empty-handed I go

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Date: 2/18/2025 7:42:00 PM
Nice poem, but too bad that thorn jabbed you. It kind of reminds me of that song, "love is a rose".
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Date: 2/13/2025 11:20:00 AM
Brilliant, Beau! … No worries, love I will pluck your petals until my answer comes up…then the mockery at the intent to grab hold of what is not yours. Fantastic. A fave!
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Beau Barberis
Date: 2/14/2025 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! Your comments mean a lot!
Date: 2/13/2025 7:31:00 AM
Dear Beau, this is such a delicate exploration of ownership and the fleeting nature of what we try to possess. Yes, the final realization, that we own nothing but "just us," is profound and very humbling. I love how you end on a note of quiet surrender. So majestic and humble and yes, it offers a tender lesson in letting go. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Beau Barberis
Date: 2/14/2025 5:45:00 AM
Such a nice comment, Daniel. Made my day! My poems make sense to me but I'm not always sure they make sense to others! I'm glad you liked it. Beau

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