Sea of Roses

Enamoured with myself, I walk my garden path 
Where the grass grows tall
Snapping off a long piece, a whistle
So shrill the dogs howl

Dandelions greet me
Their sunny dispositions radiate hello
How can I not make myself a dandelion crown?
Can I not take what I own?

Daisies dance - pleading pick me, pick me
He loves you, he loves you not
No worries, love
I will pluck your petals until my answer comes up

Scent pulls me farther along to
  a sea of roses at the edge
Their heads held high, defiant
  to the waves crashing below

Can I not pluck again?
They are mine, are they not?
I suck the pulsing red reminder
That we own nothing but just us

I try again, as they are mine!
A snip, a blossom cupped in hand
Cascading petals into nothingness
A mockery of my intent

Small acts land large on nondescript days
Majestically humble sea of roses
Here to teach and touch and love
My ego in my pocket, empty-handed I go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Crandall Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 7:42 PM
Nice poem, but too bad that thorn jabbed you. It kind of reminds me of that song, "love is a rose".
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 11:20 AM
Brilliant, Beau! … No worries, love I will pluck your petals until my answer comes up…then the mockery at the intent to grab hold of what is not yours. Fantastic. A fave!
Barberis Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Thank you, Kim! Your comments mean a lot!
Rodgers Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 7:31 AM
Dear Beau, this is such a delicate exploration of ownership and the fleeting nature of what we try to possess. Yes, the final realization, that we own nothing but "just us," is profound and very humbling. I love how you end on a note of quiet surrender. So majestic and humble and yes, it offers a tender lesson in letting go. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Barberis Avatar
February 14, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Such a nice comment, Daniel. Made my day! My poems make sense to me but I'm not always sure they make sense to others! I'm glad you liked it. Beau
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