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Sea of Dreams

Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh
I can hear the sea
It is ebbing to and fro
Rhythmically rocking me to sleep
In God’s own cradle

Jan Allison
29th October 2014

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Richard Poor

December 18, 2014 at 10:38 AM

I feel this too...very good!

Jan Allison

December 18, 2014 at 2:43 PM

Thanks Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ettie Christian-Bowling

October 30, 2014 at 3:28 PM

Very nice poem.....Dreams are like the sea and the sea is like a dream:)-Love Ettie

Jan Allison

October 30, 2014 at 3:44 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Ettie:-) hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

October 30, 2014 at 12:23 AM

Yes the ocean can be a very relaxing place to sleep near! Your write exemplifies this extremely well my friend! I truly loved reading this wondrous poem here this evening! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jan Allison

October 30, 2014 at 8:29 AM

Thank you so much for your splendid comment Russell you always make me feel so proud:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

October 29, 2014 at 8:54 PM

Oops forgot to comment.... Must have been put to sleep too...stunning Jan..hugs Tim

Jan Allison

October 30, 2014 at 8:29 AM

Lol Tim you do make me smile and thanks:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

October 29, 2014 at 7:27 PM

Ohh that is lovely!!! great image, that brought a big smile to my face :) :) :)

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 7:28 PM

HI Cas thanks for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 29, 2014 at 5:50 PM

Beautiful Jan, I can hear and feel the peace. I am so glad you can relax and what a wonderful place to do it. XOXO

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 5:55 PM

It really is stunning Brenda and we are having a wonderful relaxing time:-) hugs Jan xxx

John Matthews

October 29, 2014 at 5:28 PM

Thanks for your kind comments Jan it means a lot

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 5:29 PM

my pleasure John thanks for dropping by to see me:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

October 29, 2014 at 3:13 PM

The sea is. inspiring indeed Jan.This poem offers so much serenity.Many dreams delude us in the. end but God's cradle is always the reality of comfort.I love the way you re inspired.

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 3:52 PM

How can I fail to be inspired by such an amazing Island and such wonderful scenery Charmaine! Hugs jan xxx

M. L. Kiser

October 29, 2014 at 3:11 PM

Wonderful, I can feel that rocking sea and smell the salty air.

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 3:52 PM

Thank you M L it is absolutely blissful here and i feel at peace and relaxed:-) Hugs jan xx

Gary Bateman

October 29, 2014 at 2:38 PM

Jan, A magnificent write here and a most beautiful image!! Cheers and Spill Ink, Gary

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 3:49 PM

Thank you so much Gary I am totally chilled out in our hotel and the sound of the sea will soothe me to sleep tonight:-) Hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 29, 2014 at 1:34 PM

Truly beautiful write Jan! Love the rhythmic rocking in Gods cradle! But what when tsunamis r there ??

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 1:42 PM

Well I've got to hope and pray they don't get them over here Dr Sharma - i can hear the sea now as I type its so soothing:-) Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

October 29, 2014 at 12:08 PM

I love this Jan...my type of poetry!! You are lucky to be staying just across the road from the sea! Relax...take it easy...and enjoy:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 12:16 PM

I aim to relax 100% - no worries on that score Paul - my phone is in the Isle of Man and I want no contact with home - I need a total break as I know tough times are looming and I need to be strong:-( Hugs Jan xxx

Maurice Yvonne

October 29, 2014 at 11:52 AM

This one is just amazing Jan.

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 12:14 PM

Thanks so much Maurice - amazing how such a simple thing gives us such inspiration:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick

October 29, 2014 at 11:51 AM

I long to be beside the sea and let it rock me..Didn't get there this year..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..I found a little answer about the female cat roaring when they are calling their young, the male of the pride are two incidences when they would roar..Sara

Jan Allison

October 29, 2014 at 12:13 PM

We are on a week break away from it all - NO contact with home - I need a total break as I know tough times are ahead:-( Thanks for the answer to your question. Hugs Jan xx

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