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Sea of Dreams

Beautiful dream of mine
                                       honest and pristine
                                     ask me not what I desire
                                  for they are always ignited like fire.
                         let's not think about today and tomorrow
                        for love  can eradicate our pain and sorrow
                               so take my hand and come to me 
                                           as you dive into my sea


                                        Red Fiery

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Gary Bateman

Date: 5/17/2016 3:54:00 PM

Hello Red Fiery . . . What a metaphor and an image to be desired. Sometimes these more simple writes can indeed say so very much. Your last verse is indeed deliciously well-put. A Big Seven!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Paul Callus

Date: 3/25/2016 1:34:00 PM

Would love to be a flicker of an eye in your dreams, Smriti! Love the end line! hugs // paul

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 3/12/2016 9:58:00 AM

Very evocative words, and a happy ending.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/10/2016 12:33:00 AM

Easy-going like the sea ... surreal like dreams. You're really good with these brief little poems ... you say all you want to say, no more, no less. Well penned, Red.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2013 5:17:00 PM

Very beautiful poem!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/9/2013 3:36:00 AM

Another sweet little poem here. I quite like the flow of words. Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/8/2013 11:11:00 AM

RED FIERY BEAUTIFUL TAKING ONES HAND TO WALK INTO THE SUNSET A DREAM

Dan Kearley

Date: 8/29/2013 12:57:00 AM

So sweet.... :o) Love can eradicate our pain and sorrow. Beautiful words.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/27/2013 8:04:00 AM

Good morning Red, my poem is now done, have another read. Thanks for being the first to comment.

Red Fiery
Date: 8/27/2013 8:56:00 AM

When are u posting a new poem ? I am ready to read ur new poem again..

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/26/2013 11:19:00 PM

really touching...

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/18/2013 5:31:00 AM

You have taken me on a special path with this incredible write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a wonderful piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!!

Red Fiery
Date: 8/18/2013 5:47:00 AM

Thank you Russell !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/18/2013 2:09:00 AM

This is a very romantic and sensuous piece. You are certainly back in the groove red. Well done.

Red Fiery
Date: 8/18/2013 5:48:00 AM

Thank you Richard :)