Red Fiery Poet Rhyme

Sea of Dreams

Beautiful dream of mine
                                       honest and pristine
                                     ask me not what I desire
                                  for they are always ignited like fire.
                         let's not think about today and tomorrow
                        for love  can eradicate our pain and sorrow
                               so take my hand and come to me 
                                           as you dive into my sea


                                        Red Fiery

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Gary Bateman May 17, 2016 at 3:54 PM Hello Red Fiery . . . What a metaphor and an image to be desired. Sometimes these more simple writes can indeed say so very much. Your last verse is indeed deliciously well-put. A Big Seven!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Paul Callus March 25, 2016 at 1:34 PM Would love to be a flicker of an eye in your dreams, Smriti! Love the end line! hugs // paul

John-Ovan.P. Hull March 12, 2016 at 9:58 AM Very evocative words, and a happy ending.

Timothy Hicks March 10, 2016 at 12:33 AM Easy-going like the sea ... surreal like dreams. You're really good with these brief little poems ... you say all you want to say, no more, no less. Well penned, Red.

Arthur Vaso September 13, 2013 at 5:17 PM Very beautiful poem!!

Laura Breidenthal September 9, 2013 at 3:36 AM Another sweet little poem here. I quite like the flow of words. Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid September 8, 2013 at 11:11 AM RED FIERY BEAUTIFUL TAKING ONES HAND TO WALK INTO THE SUNSET A DREAM

Dan Kearley August 29, 2013 at 12:57 AM So sweet.... :o) Love can eradicate our pain and sorrow. Beautiful words.

Richard Lamoureux August 27, 2013 at 8:04 AM Good morning Red, my poem is now done, have another read. Thanks for being the first to comment. Red Fiery August 27, 2013 at 8:56 AM When are u posting a new poem ? I am ready to read ur new poem again..

Vinayak Pratap August 26, 2013 at 11:19 PM really touching...

Russell Sivey August 18, 2013 at 5:31 AM You have taken me on a special path with this incredible write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! What a wonderful piece, such a lovely poem, Great Work!! Red Fiery August 18, 2013 at 5:47 AM Thank you Russell !

Richard Lamoureux August 18, 2013 at 2:09 AM This is a very romantic and sensuous piece. You are certainly back in the groove red. Well done. Red Fiery August 18, 2013 at 5:48 AM Thank you Richard :)

Poet Tacito August 17, 2013 at 10:00 PM This was awesome. Embracing the power & desire of the "today" & "now". Carpe Diem to a passionate level. Red Fiery August 17, 2013 at 10:04 PM Thank you Drake :)