Sea of Discomfort

In A Sea Of Discomfort
White fog is very dense on this high sea,
no light can pierce its heavy veil.
No drug or spirit is potent 
enough to relieve my distress,
I’m lost in a turbulent 
sea of discomfort.

Little ease or peace on where
to cast my anchor.
Fear keeps me from sailing onward, 
but damned if I’m turning back.
My inner compass is damaged
and in need of repair.

My mind spins in constant 
motion trying to chart the course
of my new destination and change
the direction that my ship is sailing,
but I’m growing weary.

Being patient, kind and
true to myself is my
guilty pleasure.

There’s more comfort in accepting me.
No matter who I am, where I am, or
what bad decisions I’ve made that led me
to these treacherous seas,
I love me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/21/2010 4:21:00 PM
soup mail in 2 min. john
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Date: 5/21/2010 4:19:00 PM
just hang in there. you'll get over it. that's what they told me but it took years also. but when you come out, you'll be stronger than ever. you'll have a sence of pride that can say no when it needs to. you'll feel happiness again. thanks for writing. john
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