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Sea of Chaos

Sea of Chaos Salt the fish Salt the sea Sea pea green Sea like moss Moss takes over Moss ground cover Cover your butt Cover mine Mine big diamonds Mine huge hearts Hearts of passion Hearts on fire Fire the boss Fire up taters Taters with eyes Taters and corn Corn so sweet Corn is yellow Yellow hot sun Yellow is fun Fun is gentle Fun is wild Wild salmon Wild wind Wind whips Wind torque Torque of waves Torque of dancers Dancers on tows Dancers thin legs Legs of table Legs of leisure Leisure on Sunday Leisure for rich Rich in calories Rich relative Relative humidity Relative comfort Comfort of company Comfort of life Life lived right Life in pain Pain of torrent Pain from sharks Shark fin soup Sharks in chaos Chaos of catch Chaos is play Play Catch ~ 8/9/2017

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Dean Wood

Date: 8/10/2017 9:18:00 AM

How fun is this! I really enjoyed this. I would try one myself but I'm afraid I wouldn't know how to get out of it. That could end up bad. Lots of fun Kim!

Dean Wood
Date: 8/10/2017 11:40:00 AM

You know, this would have been a great form for the three-year old thoughts contest. It is so fun how it bounces from scene to scene so quickly!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2017 10:44:00 AM

Thanks, Dean! Try it!

Thomas Hsi

Date: 8/10/2017 8:47:00 AM

Your poem was fun to read, and I like how each line rolls from one thing to another. I like the 'connection game'.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/10/2017 10:41:00 AM

Thank you!