Kim Rodrigues Poet Blitz

Sea of Chaos

Sea of Chaos

Salt the fish
Salt the sea
Sea pea green
Sea like moss
Moss takes over
Moss ground cover
Cover your butt
Cover mine
Mine big diamonds
Mine huge hearts
Hearts of passion
Hearts on fire
Fire the boss
Fire up taters
Taters with eyes
Taters and corn
Corn so sweet
Corn is yellow
Yellow hot sun
Yellow is fun
Fun is gentle
Fun is wild
Wild salmon
Wild wind
Wind whips
Wind torque
Torque of waves
Torque of dancers
Dancers on tows
Dancers thin legs
Legs of table
Legs of leisure
Leisure on Sunday
Leisure for rich
Rich in calories
Rich relative 
Relative humidity
Relative comfort
Comfort of company
Comfort of life
Life lived right
Life in pain
Pain of torrent
Pain from sharks
Shark fin soup
Sharks in chaos
Chaos of catch
Chaos is play
Play
Catch ~

8/9/2017

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Dean Wood August 10, 2017 at 9:18 AM How fun is this! I really enjoyed this. I would try one myself but I'm afraid I wouldn't know how to get out of it. That could end up bad. Lots of fun Kim! Dean Wood August 10, 2017 at 11:40 AM You know, this would have been a great form for the three-year old thoughts contest. It is so fun how it bounces from scene to scene so quickly! Kim Rodrigues August 10, 2017 at 10:44 AM Thanks, Dean! Try it!

Thomas Hsi August 10, 2017 at 8:47 AM Your poem was fun to read, and I like how each line rolls from one thing to another. I like the 'connection game'. Kim Rodrigues August 10, 2017 at 10:41 AM Thank you!