Sea Monster

leviathan sleeps —
tosses and turns sea cauldron
white foam froths in deep

who dares awaken this beast
whose halitosis breath seethes?

2/6/2017

JOB 41
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Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 7:59 PM
oooh, what a great last line on that ocean beast's breath!!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 7, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Thank you so much!
Blanca Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Best to let the beast sleep my friend. Step lightly as we go into the night.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 10:42 PM
For sure, good friend!
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