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It’s a wonderful feeling as you gladly air your sweet melody The canticle of your ebbs is heard from your sweet glee Children shriek with laughter as they feast in haste Adults lay down to feel your scent and enjoy the rest. The blue sky is the reflection of your innate beauty The Mighty Creator had laid you down there for everybody Your smiles spark in different hue of blue and green But at snap of fingers, your splendor has been stolen The clear blue sky draws its huge curtain on your sight As the spilled oil tinges and oozes its ominous color of the night The sun sets in the middle of the day, does he go and ask for help? Scream is heard when you’re left alone in yelp The dawn has to come; yet, you’re still down there and helpless But waves rise up collecting your strength which scattered into pieces Your calmness echoes in hope as you keep yourself in prayer That someone will take you out from an odious nightmare Soon you’ve a glimpse of light from afar, just out there The sun’s vigilant call lighting up the hearts of every scavenger Shining brightly once more as they work on amelioration in short range You realize that sadness and pains are transient in this world of change The sun finally opens the curtain for a clearer and brighter sky The scavengers work hand-in-hand, in starvation they’re afraid to die Waves move towards the shore shaking their ears like cute puppies Taking care of sea creatures and throwing all unwanted wastes. The Mighty Creator is so good, He always let the sun shines again, Through prayers and strong faith, hope will be strengthen And when humans, the stewards work with nature in perfect harmony A brighter tomorrow comes in His Divine Mercy. April 26, 2013 Second Place Contest: Enlightenment, Hope and Harmony Judged: 4/29/2013 Sponsor: Russell Sivey

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Date: 6/16/2013 7:47:00 AM
I have no words to say nice, wonderful....., but simply say it is magic like scene excellently adorned with glorious natural consciousness. My fav from today too. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/13/2013 10:48:00 PM
Hey, Leonora. If I did not say it yet. Glad to see you back!!!
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:59:00 PM
This flows so beautifully A reading pleasure my friend. Love, SuZ
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Date: 5/13/2013 10:17:00 AM
Such a wistful piece that sparkles with hope and glimmers with beautiful language, leonora... THANK YOU for the personal shares we had this week... i hope to see you when i visit BKK... missed you but the talks were enough... :) hugggs!
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:49:00 AM
lovely write Leonora, a real joy to read bringing much pleasure indeed. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 5/13/2013 7:17:00 AM
WElcome back from vacation. I hope you had a really great time with your parents. (Or was it just your mom?) Back to work with you. Me too. I better get off very soon and get ready for work. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/12/2013 4:09:00 PM
reading this poem again... a lovely poem, and blessing. The sun, in my face... this is the perfect poem... always~ Linda
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Date: 5/12/2013 1:11:00 PM
Amazing work... love the last 2 lines of this. I applaud your fine artistry :)
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Date: 5/5/2013 8:12:00 PM
The sea is sheer beauty with fierce power and yet a calming effect, one of God's greatest creations and mysteries.
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Date: 5/4/2013 10:39:00 PM
excellent. Very deep write. enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:00:00 AM
An amazing poem here Leonora!Lovely read.
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Date: 5/3/2013 6:41:00 PM
A deep write! I HOPE YOU ARE ENTERING THIS IN MY CONTEST!Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love
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Date: 5/2/2013 12:55:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this creative work..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for your visit to my work..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara
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Date: 5/2/2013 10:06:00 AM
It's heartbreaking about the oil spills and I enjoy how in tune you are with nature here. Yes, we are stewards of the earth and doing such a poor job of it. Great poem, my friend.
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Date: 5/2/2013 10:04:00 AM
So you are with your mom now? Wow, that is so exciting for you. For how long? let me read your poem now!
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Date: 5/2/2013 7:05:00 AM
Hi Leonora..sorry I've been so busy on the farm of late...sping and summer are like that...now to you...you have managed to gracefully express a subject in poetry form that is amazing...hope you are having a wonderful spring friend
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:49:00 PM
HI SWEET LEO... , :-) I love the sound of "Enlightenment, Hope, and Harmony." Congratulations in Russell's contest. ~LINDA
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Date: 5/1/2013 6:04:00 AM
hi poppet and many congratulations on your winning piece love xx
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Date: 4/30/2013 4:55:00 PM
Lovely and wonderful piece,Nice going....Congrats on your superb win....XOXO...
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Date: 4/30/2013 3:11:00 PM
This is wonderful Leonora, yes i agree with all of the comments here, so inspiring...
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:40:00 AM
Excellent write. Well done. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 4/29/2013 10:08:00 PM
Amazing, beautiful, and congrats. Love Terry xoxo
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Date: 4/26/2013 3:40:00 PM
This is a mighty and lovely write my friend! I am enamored by the splendor of this wonderful poem my friend! You surely have written a special piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/26/2013 2:57:00 PM
this makes my heart feel so light, leonora... wonderfully woven from the soul... soupy mail!..:)
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Date: 4/26/2013 12:58:00 PM
Leonora my friend, who always records they incredibly beautiful poems. - I dream myself into poems from the first line .... always so good and beautifully written. - Hope you will have a relaxing and warm weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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