Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Verse

Sea Fairy

our sweet sea fairy is dreaming 
                                         her soft hair in trellis
                                                 sparkles
                                    sea soul's aroma a brimming
                                         envelopes her pelisse
                                                   circles 









MEMENTO OF WATERS - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	nette onclaud
Poet: Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 8th March, 2015

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Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2015 at 10:30 PM I see you told me what pelisse means down here in my comment. good to know that. big congrats on your win.

Eve Roper March 27, 2015 at 2:33 PM Rajat, beautiful descriptive write, congratulations on your win a 7

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2015 at 1:50 PM Congrats!! Sara

Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 10:46 AM Captivating write, my friend. I don't remember this visual but I can imagine her through your words. Congratulations! Hugs and smiles! Kim :)

Carrie Richards March 27, 2015 at 9:40 AM Oh yes........this is breathtaking !! I would place this one higher on the list !! :) Congratulations Rajat !!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 26, 2015 at 11:59 PM Sparkling with creativity, Rajat...congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Edward Ebbs March 26, 2015 at 8:53 PM Nicely written, congrats :)

Sandra Haight March 26, 2015 at 6:52 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Rajat. Nicely done. Hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:49 PM congrats on win Rajat with this charming poem hugs

Nette Onclaud March 26, 2015 at 5:24 PM mythically inviting, rajat... thanks for gracing my contest and fine congrats.. huggs

Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 3:52 PM many congrats on your win Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2015 at 4:01 PM I really like how you did your memento. Don't know what a pelisse is though. Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 9, 2015 at 12:27 PM pelisse is a woman's loose light cloak, I am a bit shaky Andie about this word. I am not sure if it has been suitable. It rhymes well with trellis that was my concern...Love Andie

Demetrios Trifiatis March 8, 2015 at 1:09 AM Sparkling beauty of a verse, dear Rajat! Good luck!

Njeri Hunjeri March 8, 2015 at 12:30 AM Nice one. All the best in the contest