Brooke Dylan Poet Quatrain

Sea Echo's My Name

Transparent of darkness of the sea touched only briefly
state of lonely madness in disfigured shadows
bowed moonlight mastering feats of fathom light that is calling so swiftly.....

I plant feet deep unto the bright that are traveled in sweeping waves
more reluctant butterfly of the fathom of light
I have begged to fly into the bittersweet swells
misty future to forsake floating unseen creatures
in the stormy seas ...

I preferred to stare to the future and bury my eyes
from the nonchalance of living things and lies
that face others on this living night....

Thoughts that never left a simply poet like me
calling mysteries to explore holding on to answers
with all my heart in the fathom light of the sea that echo's my name...

Brooke

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Weston Gregory June 21, 2014 at 6:16 AM brimming with rhythmic swells... nicely done

Phillip Fungurai May 25, 2014 at 3:54 PM beautiful and priceless poem.....you have reached poetic stardom Brooke. Best regards......Phillip/

Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2014 at 8:27 AM Who knew that an echoing flowing Brooke would lead us to the Sea. I enjoyed this piece.

Monterey Sirak May 24, 2014 at 5:50 AM Great images here, especially of the 'reluctant butterfly'. Love it! Brooke Dylan May 25, 2014 at 10:35 PM HEY GIRLFRIEND.. hope you are having a great memorial weekend..

Robert Lindley May 24, 2014 at 12:27 AM A great write my friend. I expected no less . Brooke Dylan May 25, 2014 at 10:22 PM Thank you so much Robert

Deborah Shiells May 23, 2014 at 10:08 AM Hi Brooke, I wanted to stop by and say hello and to read this write. Brooke this is simply the most elegant Poem!! It speaks volumes that are full of expression. As a fan of yours you have delighted us as always. Great write my friend. Thanks for sharing this with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah Brooke Dylan May 23, 2014 at 12:36 PM THANK YOU Deborah I will come see you ..