Sea - Diamante

Sea
                          kaleidoscopic, wild
                  rolling, breathing, shimmering 
               ships, monster fish,  liquid with life
                      swirling, drowning, sinking 
                             drinkable, blue 
                                    Wet


Created on 11/08/14 for “Diamante Poem” – Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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November 24, 2014 at 9:03 AM
Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too. You placed most of the known universe in your tiny diamante with a nice selection of choice words. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
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November 23, 2014 at 8:43 PM
I love the word kaleidoscopic to descibe the sea! Congrats on a great win, Earl! Hugs, Rhonda
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November 24, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Hi Rhonda, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Congratulations to you too. You placed most of the known universe in your tiny diamante with a nice selection of choice words. Good for you. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
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November 22, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on your winning work in the contest..I enjoyed reading it..Sara
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November 22, 2014 at 9:19 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you. Mine was good. Yours was great. Congratulations to you on your well deserved, excellent win. Have a great week end. Earl
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November 17, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Beautiful Diamante Earl. Congratulations on your win.
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November 17, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Good afternoon Brenda. Thank you so much. I enjoyed your contest entry also. Great job. Congratulations on your win. Keep up the good work. Take care. Earl
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November 17, 2014 at 12:41 AM
- A really wonderful diamond, Earl !!! Congratulations! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 17, 2014 at 6:22 AM
Good morning Anne Lise, It is nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for your encouragement. Congratulations to you too on your excellent win in this contest. Take care. Earl
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November 16, 2014 at 3:45 PM
beautifully penned Earl many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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November 16, 2014 at 4:44 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you and I appreciate your comments. Congratulations to you too on your #1 win. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl
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