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'sea Breeze'

All I see is water As far as my eyes will allow me Almost forgot What brought me here It was the memories of you The warmth of the sand In between my toes A gentle reminder of what it felt like Having you next to me Holding my hand as we took Our walks along the shore We didn't have to say a word Just allow the gentle sea breeze To mask our footprints as we went Could have been a similar day, Could have been a similar time But today - It’s just me and the gentle sea breeze To remind me of you Not saying a word And yet I can feel you With every step I take ©151014062013

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Date: 9/10/2013 5:23:00 AM
THAT WAS A REALLY BEAUTIFUL PIECE
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Date: 8/18/2013 7:16:00 PM
Nostalgia would be the word to best describe this poem. Good write
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Date: 6/27/2013 9:04:00 AM
Every poem I've read of yours touched me deeply..I love that feeling Wilma.. :)
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Date: 6/25/2013 2:26:00 PM
You have communicated a deep yearning through these lines Wilma; very touching indeed the weather here was cold enough last week we will have better this week they say, thank you for dropping by..'
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Date: 6/20/2013 9:43:00 AM
this is so moving Wilma,so you, you are indeed a wondrous poet, one i am so proud to know...
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Date: 6/17/2013 1:26:00 PM
mellow words enchant me so, wilms... you are tops!..:) huggs
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Date: 6/15/2013 2:02:00 PM
this is one of your best,Wilma. Keep them coming like this one!!
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Date: 6/14/2013 1:45:00 PM
Beautiful poem here Wilma!Love this poignant write.Glad to see a new poem from you Wilma.
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Date: 6/14/2013 10:45:00 AM
"Every step I take, every move I make". Diggin' this good! Embrace the loving winds.
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Date: 6/14/2013 10:34:00 AM
beautiful and very poignant!
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Date: 6/14/2013 9:53:00 AM
Wow, such a powerful walk this write took me on my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a delightful piece, Great work!!
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Date: 6/14/2013 7:27:00 AM
I walk with you see it through your eyes so poignant yet whimsical too very fine pen
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