Sea Breeze

wind balmy cool whispers and lulls draping around me playfully easterly Date: 08/04/2021 A Brian Strand 4 or 5 Line Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/7/2021 12:34:00 PM

so beautiful. And I see it's a winner. Congrats, sweet friend.

Date: 8/7/2021 11:45:00 AM

Ahh!! This one wraps me in a blanket of fresh air. Enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Date: 8/6/2021 7:01:00 AM

Romantic Cinquain, congrats for a First Place

Date: 8/6/2021 6:50:00 AM

Reading your poem again. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!

Date: 8/5/2021 3:54:00 AM

Great imagery in this lovely cinquain, Anitha:)

Date: 8/4/2021 11:24:00 AM

Hello Anitha, your poem has a cooling affect on me. Enjoy your day my friend.,

Date: 8/4/2021 7:54:00 AM

Nothing beats that gentle sea breeze on a hot summers day. Good luck Ani Tom

Date: 8/4/2021 7:10:00 AM

What a beautiful feel your poem gives Ani, Enjoyed, Emilia.

Date: 8/4/2021 7:00:00 AM

A beautiful Cinquain. Happy to hear from you after a long time. Hope you are fine!

Date: 8/4/2021 5:29:00 AM

Wish that sea breeze was playing around me. It's 97F at the moment.