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Sea Breeze

wind
balmy cool
whispers and lulls
draping around me playfully
easterly


Date: 08/04/2021
A Brian Strand 4 or 5 Line Poetry Contest

naturewindcinquain

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Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2021 at 12:34 PM

so beautiful. And I see it's a winner. Congrats, sweet friend.

Sara Kendrick

August 7, 2021 at 11:45 AM

Ahh!! This one wraps me in a blanket of fresh air. Enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Aniruddha Pathak

August 6, 2021 at 7:01 AM

Romantic Cinquain, congrats for a First Place

Christuraj Alex

August 6, 2021 at 6:50 AM

Reading your poem again. Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!

Joanna Daniel

August 5, 2021 at 3:54 AM

Great imagery in this lovely cinquain, Anitha:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

August 4, 2021 at 11:24 AM

Hello Anitha, your poem has a cooling affect on me. Enjoy your day my friend.,

Tom Cunningham

August 4, 2021 at 7:54 AM

Nothing beats that gentle sea breeze on a hot summers day. Good luck Ani Tom

Emilia James

August 4, 2021 at 7:10 AM

What a beautiful feel your poem gives Ani, Enjoyed, Emilia.

Christuraj Alex

August 4, 2021 at 7:00 AM

A beautiful Cinquain. Happy to hear from you after a long time. Hope you are fine!

Victor Buhagiar

August 4, 2021 at 5:29 AM

Wish that sea breeze was playing around me. It's 97F at the moment.

Sea Breeze

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