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Sajdah Al-Riyami

Sea

I akin to your scrutiny,
Gawking back at me
So strikingly Blue

Copyright © Sajdah Al-Riyami | Year Posted 2009

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June 18, 2009 at 5:32 PM

Interesting reflection in this concise poem. Love that blue water--gives me a sense of peace. I see you recently joined Poetry Soup. Welcome! Best wishes with your writing. Karen

June 11, 2009 at 4:46 AM

Terrific Haiku Sajdah>James

June 8, 2009 at 10:37 AM

Nice Tribute To The Sea. Even Such Simple Words Can Bring A Picture Of A Clear Sea To Mind.

May 25, 2009 at 2:18 PM

Very delicate language, I like it; primitive image combined with academic talk, cool! Thanks for the experience:D

May 24, 2009 at 11:49 AM

Brilliant write my friend! Wonderfully done! Laura :) Welcome to poetry-soup! Laura :)

May 22, 2009 at 9:07 AM

I love this ... some there contemplating the giant ... I feel its power like I feel this write, love and peace, my friend

May 19, 2009 at 7:28 PM

great write. I've visited the pacific and atlantic and both are beautiful shades of blue.... good job! ( I ' ve left you some soup mail)

May 19, 2009 at 10:00 AM

You carry imagery and meaning with the same power ... the sunami of your words.

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