JC Brul Poet Verse

Sea

SEA
                    sapphire
                  translucent

             untold deep longings
           gently swept by the ebb
     into the cliffs where love hushed

"in thy deep bosom wounds shall heal "





             18 September 2020

Pyramids
Contest Judged:  9/20/2020 6:05:00 AM
Sponsored by: Joseph May
1st place

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Line Gauthier July 21, 2021 at 3:58 AM well crafted ~ love the soothing message

Regina Mcintosh November 22, 2020 at 6:15 AM Love this my friend,. God bless you always

John Castellenas October 12, 2020 at 1:33 AM Amazing use of words. You made the reader feel and understand every word. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

Angela Crabtree October 2, 2020 at 6:39 PM Beautiful description of the sea adding romance to the theme. I also liked the healing aspect of it. Congratulations on your win! Peace, Angie

Malabika Ray Choudhury September 29, 2020 at 7:10 PM Congratulations, Dear Friend. This is so touching! What a mysterious imagery!

Carol Mitra September 20, 2020 at 11:18 PM A Healing Sea...We so need this during these trying times....Congrats on your win JCB.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 1:40 PM I just KNEW this would be a big winner. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 12:37 PM - JCB ... beautiful written :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 11:45 AM Beautiful write JCB, Congrats on your win

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 10:54 AM this is a fav for me JC, what a lovely way to think of the sea. Many congratulations on your 1st place. Jeanne :D

Andrea Dietrich September 19, 2020 at 10:27 AM FANTASTIC!!! So poetic.

Nette Onclaud September 18, 2020 at 3:12 PM a sense of mystery makes this poem arresting...well done, JC...huggs