Sculptured Snow

scope of sculptured snow
    illuminated, edgy
      exposé albino

         8/23/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rigoler Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Well, Kim, I feel for you as housewife and bathroom cleaner-upper! This complaint I hear often from the wives of my male friends. Are men just sloppy? Many thanks for the stop. Always appreciated./ Maurice
Wolf Avatar
August 23, 2020 at 7:00 PM
Love that last line, Kim. You really nailed it -- and me too! Great senryu! :) Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
August 24, 2020 at 7:03 AM
Thank you, Gershon!
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