Scuba Experience

a thick suit envelopes me
the sun beats down
dang, this is so hot. 
i feel sweat drip 
and wrap around my arms 
my first steps into the cool water 
aww.....love it....
sweet coolness
further i go 
panic rips through 
what happened? 
i don't know, 
my mind goes utterly chaotic 
i back float to shore 
i try again the day of next 
once i do, i crave more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Harrison Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 7:52 PM
Oh this is groovy! I would love to try.
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