Notes About The Poem

paraphrase of rev 3:20/mark 1:15/john 20:21&21:16/matt 28:20/acts 1:8&zech 4:6

Scriptures Favoured In Verse

he stands at the door    & 
                                    knocks
hear his voice?
                      let him come in
his realm
                is nearby

turn back
                & trust 

for as he was sent
so
are  you  & I

to tend his sheep
     disciple
       & reveal 

not by might or power
but
by
      the spirit 
                           within
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Dotzler Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Really well done. A thorough meditation on many Scripture pieces you so expertly intertwined. "To tend his sheep...not by might or power...but the spirit within" A powerful ending! God bless!
Strand Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 4:16 PM
Cheers James,thanks
Kauffman Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 4:45 PM
So well said, Brian. In our weakness is God's strength - God's Spirit constantly working. You remind us that what we cannot take the credit! Blessings to you. Thank you for sharing these verses of faith.
Strand Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 12:07 AM
Thanks Sam,prompted by a contest theme,inspired yesterday pentecost sunday.Cheers
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