Scripture, Science, Cadets

Quickly and thoroughly as I possibly could
I scanned the pages in front of me.
The air, from the outset,
had been thick with dread, 
in this place it often was.
So intimate and close a witness was I
that I couldn't help but wonder
if I may be incidentally decapitated
while she was pointedly decapitated.
I might or might not have wondered
if we'd all be incidentally deafened
while she was pointedly deafened.
Strands of hair, torn from her head,
waited a moment for still
before settling, alarmed and trembling,
on her shoulders, 
and some on the floor.
I was so intimate and close a witness,
separated by no more
than half a tenuous yard,
and a hatred took root that day.
Quickly as I could, 
it may well have been too quickly, 
and thoroughly as I could,
which was not very thoroughly at all,
I scanned the pages in front of me
and wondered if I might be next.

14th August 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Messina Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 8:50 AM
This is great Lawrence. A question many of us have asked ourselves. "Will I be next" Awesome poetry my friend...Charlie
Sharp Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Charles, very kind of you.
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:54 AM
Deep emotional write my friend...well executed...love & light...^WW^
Sharp Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 10:34 AM
Thank you very much for reading, I'm really pleased that you liked this, visit greatly appreciated.
Pinet Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Your words speak in an elusive abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. Like the crying strings of a sad violin, we are lured beyond the realm of words, to an alternate reality that resonates within shadows unseen, Emile.
Sharp Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 11:51 PM
Thanks, Emile, I'm pleased if I can hold a reader's attention for a moment. Thanks for reading.
One Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Damn... deep personal poem... I like what you did here..
Sharp Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 11:50 PM
Thank you, humbling to get this comment from such a respected poet.
Man Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 9:58 AM
A creative and clever work that built to a climax.. this was Great!!
Sharp Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 11:49 PM
Thanks LM, good to see you back here.
Pandit Avatar
August 14, 2018 at 1:55 PM
You kept me wondering what's next..good ending to your poem..well done, Lawrence.
Sharp Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Thanks Vijay, there for your enjoyment.
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August 14, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Wonderfully unsettling poem Lawrence. Good stuff. xomo
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August 15, 2018 at 7:39 AM
I SO APPRECIATE THAT COMMENT awesome ;p
Sharp Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 12:09 AM
Thank you, I'm pleased to have put you ill at ease..;-)
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