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Quickly and thoroughly as I possibly could I scanned the pages in front of me. The air, from the outset, had been thick with dread, in this place it often was. So intimate and close a witness was I that I couldn't help but wonder if I may be incidentally decapitated while she was pointedly decapitated. I might or might not have wondered if we'd all be incidentally deafened while she was pointedly deafened. Strands of hair, torn from her head, waited a moment for still before settling, alarmed and trembling, on her shoulders, and some on the floor. I was so intimate and close a witness, separated by no more than half a tenuous yard, and a hatred took root that day. Quickly as I could, it may well have been too quickly, and thoroughly as I could, which was not very thoroughly at all, I scanned the pages in front of me and wondered if I might be next. 14th August 2018

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Date: 9/10/2018 8:50:00 AM
This is great Lawrence. A question many of us have asked ourselves. "Will I be next" Awesome poetry my friend...Charlie
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/11/2018 12:00:00 AM
Thanks Charles, very kind of you.
Date: 8/21/2018 12:54:00 AM
Deep emotional write my friend...well executed...love & light...^WW^
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/22/2018 10:34:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading, I'm really pleased that you liked this, visit greatly appreciated.
Date: 8/19/2018 3:34:00 PM
Your words speak in an elusive abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. Like the crying strings of a sad violin, we are lured beyond the realm of words, to an alternate reality that resonates within shadows unseen, Emile.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/19/2018 11:51:00 PM
Thanks, Emile, I'm pleased if I can hold a reader's attention for a moment. Thanks for reading.
Date: 8/15/2018 4:39:00 PM
Damn... deep personal poem... I like what you did here..
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/15/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, humbling to get this comment from such a respected poet.
Date: 8/15/2018 9:58:00 AM
A creative and clever work that built to a climax.. this was Great!!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/15/2018 11:49:00 PM
Thanks LM, good to see you back here.
Date: 8/14/2018 1:55:00 PM
You kept me wondering what's next..good ending to your poem..well done, Lawrence.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/15/2018 12:11:00 AM
Thanks Vijay, there for your enjoyment.
Date: 8/14/2018 11:00:00 AM
Wonderfully unsettling poem Lawrence. Good stuff. xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/15/2018 7:39:00 AM
I SO APPRECIATE THAT COMMENT awesome ;p
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 8/15/2018 12:09:00 AM
Thank you, I'm pleased to have put you ill at ease..;-)

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