Mirek Eric Sulkowski Poet Rhyme

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I was gonna
 write a poem
To give thanks
 and praise you Lord,

Soon to learn
 my rhymes were crippled 
With no power 
were my words,

So I beg you;
heal my weakness!
Take the darkness
From my soul,

Asking patience 
And forgiveness
‘cause you know-
I’ll scribble more! 

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Poet Destroyer A September 25, 2014 at 8:29 PM Nice win...PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 25, 2014 at 7:49 AM Congrats on ur winning awesome write Miroslaw! Great work really ! Mirek Eric Sulkowski September 29, 2014 at 3:06 PM Thank you

Maurice Yvonne September 24, 2014 at 7:59 PM Congratulations on your win with this fine write. Mirek Eric Sulkowski September 29, 2014 at 3:05 PM Thank you

Tim Smith September 24, 2014 at 4:12 PM A great scribble...congrats Mirek Eric Sulkowski September 25, 2014 at 3:16 PM Thanks Tim. Seems like scribbling pays off... sometimes :)

Brenda Meier-Hans September 24, 2014 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on your win Miroslaw. I love this beautiful poem, especially the last line. Mirek Eric Sulkowski September 29, 2014 at 3:05 PM I wasn't sure how to finish it off at first, and then it came to me. Glad you enjoyed it Brenda

Jan Allison September 24, 2014 at 5:02 AM a beautiful heartfelt prayer that i can relate too many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Mirek Eric Sulkowski September 29, 2014 at 3:01 PM Thank you Jan

Eve Roper September 22, 2014 at 4:19 PM Thank you, Miroslaw, I enjoyed your writing.. A wonderful prayer that I often tell myself not in those same words but almost. love eve Mirek Eric Sulkowski September 23, 2014 at 2:49 PM Thanks Eve. Glad you liked it