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Scribbled Thoughts

i stare at the walls
blank mind
and paper
laugh back

has the ink run dry
from pen, or thoughts
dried from mind?

i know the motion
upturn wrist
press firmly...
cut deep
bleed free

feel pain, relieve pain,
relive again
awaken my mind
so it bleeds 
flows outward
from within

one thought
one trickle
one moment of darkness
spilling across sheets of white
either way, i bleed again!

Copyright © Sandra Adams | Year Posted 2013

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Robin Davis Date: 10/31/2013 9:04:00 AM Sandra This is an intense and deep write. Full of emotion and feeling from your mind and heart. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Poetry Dan poem. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/21/2013 12:59:00 AM very interesting analogy, Sandra. I don't know how I ever missed this one. I am going to try to stay current with your lovely poetry for sure!!! Login to Reply

David Scott Date: 9/20/2013 3:34:00 PM LOVE YOUR METAPHORES LIKE HOW TWO MINDS THINK ALIKE XXXDAVDSCOTT THANKS FOR YOUR KIND WORDS ON MINE Login to Reply

Allan Koven Date: 9/19/2013 10:59:00 AM I have posed a similar question with "Tap Tap". Your poem truly reflects a writer's mind when trying to compose. Excellent! Allan Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM thank you...I went over and read your poem...thanks for pointing yours out to me...hugs :)

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 9/19/2013 4:15:00 AM I really like your skilful play with words Sandra. You used it to great effect to create a vehement piece of writing. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM thank you my poet friend....hugs :)

Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 9/17/2013 8:52:00 PM Ooooo....I can relate to this...I love the every line here..."paper laugh back" lovely. Login to Reply Sandra Adams Date: 9/20/2013 10:07:00 AM thank you for your kind reply...hugs :)