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Scribbled Thoughts

i stare at the walls blank mind and paper laugh back has the ink run dry from pen, or thoughts dried from mind? i know the motion upturn wrist press firmly... cut deep bleed free feel pain, relieve pain, relive again awaken my mind so it bleeds flows outward from within one thought one trickle one moment of darkness spilling across sheets of white either way, i bleed again!

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/31/2013 9:04:00 AM

Sandra This is an intense and deep write. Full of emotion and feeling from your mind and heart. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Poetry Dan poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/21/2013 12:59:00 AM

very interesting analogy, Sandra. I don't know how I ever missed this one. I am going to try to stay current with your lovely poetry for sure!!!

David Scott

Date: 9/20/2013 3:34:00 PM

LOVE YOUR METAPHORES LIKE HOW TWO MINDS THINK ALIKE XXXDAVDSCOTT THANKS FOR YOUR KIND WORDS ON MINE

Allan Koven

Date: 9/19/2013 10:59:00 AM

I have posed a similar question with "Tap Tap". Your poem truly reflects a writer's mind when trying to compose. Excellent! Allan

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2013 10:05:00 AM

thank you...I went over and read your poem...thanks for pointing yours out to me...hugs :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/19/2013 4:15:00 AM

I really like your skilful play with words Sandra. You used it to great effect to create a vehement piece of writing.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2013 10:06:00 AM

thank you my poet friend....hugs :)

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 9/17/2013 8:52:00 PM

Ooooo....I can relate to this...I love the every line here..."paper laugh back" lovely.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2013 10:07:00 AM

thank you for your kind reply...hugs :)