Scribble All Over Your Face

Fueled by 
a schizoid frenzy
in an 
angers intensity
and
loves acidity 

Sparked by
a passions blazing
in an
array of crayons
and
blank faced canvas

Ignited by
a lovers raging
in an
unleashing of scribbling
and
vivid colors releasing 

Fired by
a wild appeasing 
in an
mind blowing flow
and
caught up in throws

Cooled by
an abstract messiness
in an
anger well spent
and
into the closet

This Scribbled Face Went!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/4/2016 10:07:00 PM
You'd never be able to tell that this was your first attempt. I can visualize each move and feel the intensity of the emotion fueling it making the atmosphere heavy.
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:14:00 AM
Art is art is art. I can see this frantic and angry scene playing out, the motions of the hands, arms flailing wildly, the look of defiance in the artists eyes and then the masterpiece that comes, only to be locked away so the true feelings of the emotions are never know. This was great Holly, yes indeed you are an artist, even your poetry comes to us in furious brush strokes.
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Chris. This was a challenging write. Took two hours. Thanks for the idea. It was really how you described it... The way I painted it.
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