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A prosetry construct of a surreal video poem.
Screenpoem Pitch by Odin Roark Night Empty wet ghost town street Work lights spotted Tumble weed shadows Like vehement crusted webs Gila monster stares vacant Fat lady carries midget man to bed Lions sleep Elephants sway trunks Phillip Glass sounds undulate Horses prick ears 3 legged cat wails Cat turns into old woman Tumbleweed shadows chase woman House trailer bathed in pink light Fat lady steps in Crazy mirror makes fat lady thin Young Crazier than old Old woman changes into trapeze bikini Lion tamer and young old lady kiss 3 legged cat scurries under bed Lion tamer drops to knees Pleads his love Snaps whip Cat hisses Distant lightning Trailer pink turns blue Thunder rocks trailer Rain washes trailer away Old woman Fat again Walks in desolate rain Swirls cotton candy around tongue 3 legged cat jumps in lion cage Stares at lion Missing leg scratches ear Dreaming Purring Lion growling Quiet Oh so... Quiet Fade out

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