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Screen Star Fade

The beauty fades, fades, fades away Treatments, surgery, balms, Beaujolais Only delay ever-creeping decay The face now ash gray ~ vanished her day July 26, 2020 Four Lines Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/28/2020 4:33:00 AM

I think this will end up with the winner's silver trophy cup.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/27/2020 11:53:00 AM

and then Gone With The Wind! Aloha! Rico

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/27/2020 4:52:00 PM

Oh, no! She can't view that flick anymore, even as she melts away! lol. Thanks, Rico! :) gw

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/26/2020 9:47:00 PM

Lovely verse Gershon.. The four lines said the story of a life time...Good luck..

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/27/2020 4:50:00 PM

Take the 'i' out of the word said, and here's what you wrote: 'The four lines sad, the story of a lifetime.' How about that?! ~ Revisionist

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/26/2020 9:40:00 PM

A marvelous verse on stardom and the ravages of time, Gershon. This is quite an impressive entry. Good luck! :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/27/2020 4:55:00 PM

Thanks for your support, Evelyn. I can sure use it. Constance's contests are always highly competitive. Peace and Joy, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/27/2020 4:49:00 PM

Thanks for your support, Evelyn. I can sure use it. Constance's contests are always highly competitive. Peace and Joy, Gershon