Notes About The Poem

Free Revelation Transformation illustration and picture

Screen of Awareness

 
"In the theory of personality, the conscious mind consists of everything inside of our awareness. This is the aspect of our mental processing that we can think and talk about rationally. Quote by _Sigmund Freud After birth our bodies are aging, slowly ... but by forty we notice the changes: with cells and with bones a war is raging. We notice that our muscles have less ranges; we have bothersome metacarpals and phalanges ! Oh, each of us have lived life in chapters. with ups and downs we are a constant changing book: experience make us good adapters. We just float ... flowing along like a forest brook; and know real truth from just silly gobbledygook ! All through life there is constant awareness, it ebbs and flows ... changing and we see ourselves: and hopefully our unique rareness. Never let your life gather dust like books on shelves, be aware ... encourage others to help themselves ! To be aware is to know who you are, your thoughts, dreams, character traits and even your flaws: oh, be aware of this world ... close and far. When upset don't get angry and bring out the claws; be aware, step back, take a breath and a long pause ! ___________________ May 10, 2023 Poetry/Quintain (English)/Screen Of Awareness Copyright Protected, ID 05-1546-378-10 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, Screen Of Awareness sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 05/26/2023 Eighth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your win, Constance! Your charming and one-of-a-kind rhyme is beautifully crafted. May you be blessed on your journey ahead.
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment, and compliment !
Alex Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 7:09 AM
"To be aware is to know who you are" - Great truth is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:50 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment, and congratulations !
Kauffman Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 8:56 PM
Wonderful written - life's journey into maturity beautifully preserved in your words Constance! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
La France Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 4:15 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the nice comment and congratulations !
Maverick Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 2:19 PM
A lot of good advice, to be aware of Constance, I'm getting better with age And the guidance of God.' Good to Read you today.'
La France Avatar
May 13, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Joe, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, me too !
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 10, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Hello Constance, I love the photo of the Eye. Did you know that the Eye protects you from evil? I have the necklace and bracelet. This poem has deep meaning for me. I like the whole poem. The verse 2-3-and 4. Also my fav. Love & Friendship /Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 11:17 AM
Hello Constance, You are very welcome. Friendship & Love. /Darlene\
La France Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 6:43 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and FAV !
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace