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Screams of Life

She lay on the bed Screaming The pain was expressed in the pitch of her voice Nurses were hovering over her monitoring her condition Her husband was banished into the corridor He paced up and down as if attempting to form a trench in the marble Her screams subsided for a brief moment Then escalated, echoing through the hospital He couldn’t handle it any longer And burst into the room Only to be ushered out again He had noticed blood on the bed For the first time, he felt helpless His wife’s screams were like pins piercing his skin He continued his pacing up and down A doctor came to the door Briefly stopped to check his bleeper Before entering the room Moments later the doctor came out With blooded gloves “ Your wife will be ok,” the doctor said “ By the way Mr. Aims, congratulations, you have a baby boy.” He raced in overwhelmed by the tears of joy. * "HARVEST OF HAPPINESS" Linda-Marie The Sweetheart of P.S. Contest*

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Date: 9/16/2010 10:26:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Sidney. Hope you have a wonderful day. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/15/2010 3:43:00 PM
Power packed and emotional poem....and yet alls well that ends well !!! :)
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Date: 9/15/2010 2:47:00 PM
Was suspicious that might be it, but wasn't sure. Great poem and structure, kept you wondering. Is there such as thing as a mystery poem?
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:44:00 PM
You had me worried about her, Sidney, and I was so relieved to learn she had given birth. Truly a joyous ending to your compelling poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/15/2010 1:14:00 PM
I really dig your title for this write my friend. Could visualize the scene while reading it as well ;) luv Wilma
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