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Screaming Freedom

Whose fault is it Who's to blame must it all be ME only me... Yes, I have my mistakes I admitted, didn't I? Childish ways Decision sways Unplanned mistakes Consequences shake Didn't mean to, don't you believe? consecutive days dotted months yearlong vents.. I made you cry and so I too cried. I put you to shame And so I was too. I failed you and so myself too. But.. they are all in the past. The past. Won't you learn to let go of them? [Just I am learning to forget and forego] However.. If you want to stay there Spare me.. Don't drag me there. Simple as I want my peace I want to move on... Just to move on... Do understand this. Doesn't matter if you will never like me I won't push you I won't force you I won't please you This never be to be proud nor am I bragging nor am I too hard headed. I just want to discover ME. not from your mold not from your dictation not by force not anymore in anyone's shadow Don't insist. But just me so... If you do care If you do love me Let me be.. © O. E. Guillermo 11:25pm October 15, 2014 Sponsor Judy Konos Contest Name c'est la vie 3rd place

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Date: 11/13/2014 3:26:00 PM
Dropping back for another read and congratulations.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/15/2014 3:31:00 AM
thanks Brenda.. :) appreciate this.. :
Date: 11/13/2014 2:11:00 PM
Back for another read and with congratulations, Olive_eloi! [mincepies?] :) // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/15/2014 3:29:00 AM
hahha mincepies..!!! never taste such Paul.. send them now! :D
Date: 11/13/2014 9:17:00 AM
Well expressions emotions, congrats on the win
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/15/2014 3:29:00 AM
thanks much.. :)!
Date: 11/13/2014 12:20:00 AM
Strong emotions Olive, well done and congrats to you
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/15/2014 3:28:00 AM
thanks much Mark.. I so enjoyed your poems.. :)
Date: 11/12/2014 6:52:00 PM
Excellent write Olive congratulations on your win.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/15/2014 3:27:00 AM
thanks much Maurice.. :)
Date: 11/12/2014 4:01:00 PM
Very expressive and powerfully penned Olive- many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan x
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/15/2014 3:24:00 AM
thanks much Jan.. yes need those hugs.. :) thanks much God bless us all.. :)
Date: 10/17/2014 5:32:00 PM
I insist, be the person you are meant to be:)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/18/2014 11:58:00 PM
yes.. I shall be.. :) thanks.. GBU
Date: 10/16/2014 12:44:00 PM
You know exactly what you want; the past does not count any more; you want peace and freedom...and that means moving on. Very expressive and strong poem written with conviction. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 11:30:00 AM
PAul your arrow on my chest!!!! :D thanks much Paul.. God bless.... // hugs
Date: 10/15/2014 7:01:00 PM
i pray olive you find your freedom as your pen flows beautiful bless you
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 10:26:00 AM
thanks much Liam .. And yours as well.. :D
Date: 10/15/2014 2:03:00 PM
You deserve to find peace and to do that you have to find yourself. Good luck in your quest.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 9:51:00 AM
Thanks much Brenda.. .. :) God bless you.. ;)
Date: 10/15/2014 10:50:00 AM
"Simple as I want my peace I want to move on... Just to move on..." I tend to experience these kinds of feelings, never their fault always yours, evening in teasing it is not fare. thank you Olive, did enjoy this pen :) eve
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Date: 10/15/2014 8:00:00 PM
thanks much, Eve.. this just a bubble from my thoughts.. :D!

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