Scratch Off

My nephew scratched his ticket 
For the lottery, to find
He’d won a rather hefty sum;
It really blew his mind.

Which made me think, does everyone
Who plays expect this news?
If so, perhaps to win at last
Means one has paid his dues.

In any case, I hope this windfall
Helps some plans to hatch
And doesn’t cause an outcome
That is not quite up to scratch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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August 29, 2023 at 12:37 AM
How lovely for your nephew to have a win ilene….nice to know it is real haha!! Debx
Rolland Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 4:08 PM
a lucky nephew, should buy other tickets i guess, nice reading, thanks
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:29 PM
It is so lovely to hear someone has had a windfall Ilene! hugs Jan xx
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 2:26 PM
I can never figure the logic of someone who says ‘I’ve won ten pounds” when they spent more than that on the tickets/cards. But as some people do actually ‘win’ win, I congratulate your nephew on his good fortune. Nicely rhymed, Ilene
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 12:49 PM
- I have put an end to the belief in winning luck - it is never about anything other than luck ... and I have never had winning luck, Ilene :) - Congratulations to your nephew ... hooray ! - hugs
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