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Scorpio

Seize my hand and lead me so written in the stars soulfully we journey soulmate sign for Virgo slow dancing real slow scorpion’s love bite sting shot arrow to my heart

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 5:28:00 PM

This is cute and it made me think of my first most precious guy I ever dated . I only saw him a week because he went back to French Quebec . I only recall he had a November birthday. But I wish I knew if he were Scorpio or Sagittarius. I am a Virgo so I hope he was Scorpio. Congrats for your win

Lise Clendening
Date: 11/2/2024 5:47:00 PM

Thank you so much for the heads up! I really appreciated it. The second attempt was better. Hey, I’m trying. I’m also a Virgo.

Silent One

Date: 10/24/2024 12:15:00 PM

This is excellent... Great use o the letter, S

Lise Clendening
Date: 10/24/2024 12:21:00 PM

Thank you, Silent One!

Ink Empress

Date: 10/24/2024 10:55:00 AM

Dear Lise, this feels like an astral connection between two souls , cosmically aligned, how beautiful and inviting it is, I especially love “ Seize my hand and I will lead so written in the bright stars soulfully we will journey” absolutely captivating and well woven. If its for the contest, best wishes, pleasure reading this Pleiades ..sending you light always

Lise Clendening
Date: 10/25/2024 3:17:00 PM

Sorry, yes, it is for the contest, Ink!

Lise Clendening
Date: 10/24/2024 12:20:00 PM

Thank you, Ink!