Scorned

I sent you a love letter Poured out my heart to you, But I should have known better, You laughed...and said adieu! ------------------------------------

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/17/2015 1:59:00 AM

G'day Paul... I'm certain many over time can relate to your poem, but as they say; when one door shuts another opens - thank you Paul - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Lindsay; maybe she thought I was horsing about!:) Yes, one door shuts and another two open! All the best. // paul

Diane Christian

Date: 7/5/2015 11:49:00 PM

nice write, thanks for your kind comments and support on my poems

Paul Callus
Date: 7/6/2015 12:29:00 AM

It has been my pleasure, Diane! Thank you for reading mine. Have a lovely week. //paul

John Fleming

Date: 6/30/2015 2:16:00 AM

Nicely expressed, Paul. My very best regards! :) john.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2015 2:59:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed, John! Thank you for stopping by. All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2015 11:22:00 PM

here is a little one I somehow missed! I enjoyed finding a poem of yours to read tonight!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/25/2015 3:35:00 PM

Always pleased to have you popping in, Andrea. These 'shorties' are like the thought of the day, or the memory of the day; I have dozens of these jotted down in my diary..!

Peter Dome

Date: 6/18/2015 6:35:00 AM

Short and to the point hope it's not true my friend. One I can relate to. Well done. Pete.7.

Peter Dome
Date: 6/18/2015 7:39:00 AM

So glad tohear that Paul. I think we all perhaps had been through this atone time. Sad that love letters don't seem to be sent no more, much better than a text don't you think. best wishes. Pete.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 7:21:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Peter. It's a figment of my imagination, but there was something similar when still in my teens (long time ago!). Thank you for reading and for the high rating. // paul

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 6/15/2015 2:19:00 AM

Oh! this touched me painfully, a loveable write Paul.......A.M.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/15/2015 4:47:00 PM

Yes, Afolabi..this is sad! But that's life! All the best. // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/14/2015 4:42:00 AM

:( I'm with Judy on this one. Must be insane...Hugs

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 7:09:00 AM

:) Both you and Judy are very kind, Eileen:) Perhaps I was insane to think that she would hold any feelings for me!! Hugs // paul

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 6/13/2015 8:39:00 PM

Well Paul: When one door opens another closes or should that be vice versa. Look on the bright side it's about her not you. Time for a Mango Daiquiri I think

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 7:13:00 AM

I think I'll take your advice, Suzanne:) Sorrows are easy to drown in rum and vodka!! All the best. // paul

Judy Konos

Date: 6/13/2015 8:20:00 PM

I wouldn't worry, if she left you she must be insane..Good Poem...nice guy...

Paul Callus
Date: 6/14/2015 6:10:00 AM

Aw Judy...you are too kind *blush* :) Thank you for reading. Have a lovely day! // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2015 5:46:00 PM

aww Paul this is a sad rhyme:-) hugs jan xxx 7

Paul Callus
Date: 6/13/2015 6:05:00 PM

Hi Jan! Nothing is more sad than scorned love:( Thank you for liking:) Hugs // paul