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Scorched Eyeballs

Your raging hot poems are so very nice. To prevent eye damage and not pay the price. I have to use "shades" if read more than twice. The screen starts to smoking, when I click up your work. And when I start drooling, I feel like a jerk. But I keep on reading to get more of a perk. Your poems are so hot, but they're done in great taste. You say all the right words, with never a waste. And I'm always turned on in exceeding great haste. Not only hot poems, but others you write. Tributes, Acrostics, and free verse on this site. You're a poet extraordiniare, and with honor and might. *Whoever this describes, then this poem is for you!!! lol

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Date: 1/26/2010 4:04:00 AM
Oh, Marty... I didn't know you lived in North Carolina! I wrote "Riddle Me This" about you, this morning. SMILES. Today, the riddle is solved. And with great fun. Your words here, honoring Linda-Marie, are extraordinary in themselves. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:46:00 PM
Steaming hot, Marty! I didn't know you and Linda-Marie were an item until now. She surely is the Poetry Soup Sweetheart! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2010 7:33:00 PM
GREAT.. then I will be dabbling on writing one especially for u Marty... keep an eye out for it... coming soon... once I am back in the swing of things after this trial ends tomorrow... hurrah..... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:34:00 PM
U my friend Marty can write for me and about me anytime... great words of rhyme here to enjoy.. and I did... going right to my favorites... right now... on my passionate sled.. snow here tomorrow... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:31:00 PM
Thankxxx .. I am quite impressed .. if I am correct in assuming it is I from your comments last night and tonight.. I am in my "hottie" poem mode I guess... the contest called for no use of the word LOVE so I had to make it a "scorcher" instead.. hope Matt appreciates it .. written during my lunch hour on jury duty today... glad u so enjoy every posting.. will try to tone it down a bit if possible but they say your poetry is a reflection of who u are.. so I guess whoever said it must know me..
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Date: 1/20/2010 10:07:00 PM
Ha, Ha, Ha!! Marty, you're not only a Poet but also a diplomat!! Goes to my favs. I like this! Peace, Audrey Thanks again for reading and leaving comments on my poems!
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Date: 1/20/2010 3:28:00 PM
I must admit Marty, this is a very unique way of getting hot sensual poets to go by your way. LOL! As usual, a great write Marty. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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