Scold Me Not

Scold me not, oh LIFE,
For
Failing so many of my promises 
To keep 
Before pondering upon your inability  
To 
Honor your very own! 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
   20 FEBRUARY 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
March 5, 2014 at 7:12 AM
Yes We build many roads and paths..but life has the ability to divert our directions in the way it wants.To honour's life will We desert our promises so many times.I really enjoyed the thoughts penned in verse.
Manassian Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 10:05 AM
Yes...so so true. Your wisdom continues to astound me.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Your kindness surpasses any wisdom I may possess! Thank you agapiti mou!
Carrillo Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 11:15 AM
We all make promises that sometimes we can't keep. We just hope that God and life forgives us. Thanks for sharing. ... Lucy
Walker  Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Beautiful Demetrios... Verlena
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Thank you Vernela for your kind visit!
Sivey Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 6:41 AM
This one is quite deep my friend! I surely loved reading this illustrious write here this morning! What a glorious poem, such a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
Trifiatis Avatar
February 20, 2014 at 2:34 PM
Thank you my dear good friend Russell for your visit and your superb comment!
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