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Scintillation

The velvet black sky, Holds the diamonds of the night: Jewels, darkness bestows.

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/3/2009 5:58:00 AM

Velvet black sky is amazing...you are such a talent.

James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2009 3:45:00 PM

Super Haiku, awesome sky painted here Raul>>James

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/2/2009 3:44:00 PM

very wonderfully emotional response I had! Raul! nice...jim

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 7/2/2009 3:35:00 PM

Great imagery - black velvet and diamonds are so luxurious..

Krista Kurth

Date: 7/2/2009 3:09:00 PM

I love the whole poem and how it flows - each image giving meaning to the next, and flowing back into itself. Krista

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/2/2009 12:34:00 PM

the ideas you get in your mind,your creativity amazes me--velvet black sky--i love the way you manage to describe the black sky as something velvety and beautiful--i love the picture of the universe,it mesmerizes me---outstanding my friend---charma