Scintillation

The velvet black sky,
Holds the diamonds of the night:
Jewels, darkness bestows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Higgins Avatar
July 3, 2009 at 5:58 AM
Velvet black sky is amazing...you are such a talent.
Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:45 PM
Super Haiku, awesome sky painted here Raul>>James
Goff Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:44 PM
very wonderfully emotional response I had! Raul! nice...jim
Bellefleur Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Great imagery - black velvet and diamonds are so luxurious..
Kurth Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:09 PM
I love the whole poem and how it flows - each image giving meaning to the next, and flowing back into itself. Krista
Chircop Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 12:34 PM
the ideas you get in your mind,your creativity amazes me--velvet black sky--i love the way you manage to describe the black sky as something velvety and beautiful--i love the picture of the universe,it mesmerizes me---outstanding my friend---charma
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