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Scintillating Snowflakes

Wintry white wisps wondrously whirl Soft sparkling snowflakes silently swirl Coolly carpeting countrysides carefully Dazzling diamonds dancing delightfully Submitted Contest forms A contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 28th December 2014

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Edmund Strempfl

Date: 8/5/2019 8:06:00 PM

Like the descriptive choice of words beginning with the same letter and reminds me when some of us would write coded poetry in my school days and have to break the code with the clue in the poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Edmund I love using alliteration in some of my poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/9/2018 11:39:00 PM

A beauty. Charming poem, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 2/10/2018 3:44:00 AM

I love alliteration as a poetic device:-) hugs jan xx

John Mudge

Date: 9/16/2016 8:00:00 PM

I love the alliteration! Lovely evocation of winter. You even worked in a rhyme. A lot of emotion for four short lines. As usual I am a year late in commenting.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/17/2016 6:46:00 PM

Thanks so much John I am very fond of this particular poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/23/2016 6:07:00 PM

Hi Jan, congratulations on your win in the contest. Excellent alliteration Jan. I do love the snow and you have brought those snowflakes to life for me. I started to picture such a wondrous scene. Up to your usual standard Jan. Just reading this piece has cooled me down this evening. Wonderful. Always an honour to read Jan. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2016 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Mike I do love using alliteration and its so lovely to showcase older poems that rarely get read these days:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/23/2016 5:26:00 PM

A beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, bl

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2016 3:23:00 PM

Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2016 5:13:00 PM

AWesome alliteration, my friend. BIG congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2016 5:15:00 PM

Thanks Andrea its so lovely to be able to showcase an old poem that rarely gets read any more:-) hugs jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2016 1:26:00 PM

Jan, congratulations....Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~

Jan Allison
Date: 7/23/2016 1:39:00 PM

Many thanks Linda I love that poem for the imagery and alliteration:-) thanks for another great contest:-) hugs Jan xx

John Watt

Date: 5/27/2016 6:09:00 PM

Absolutely adore an awesome Allison alliteration... e-hugs ~ John W

Jan Allison
Date: 7/15/2016 7:49:00 AM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

John Mudge

Date: 5/17/2016 11:44:00 PM

I loved the snowflake poem. It inspires me to do something like that myself. I liked the form and the thought that went into it. Wonderful.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/27/2016 4:34:00 PM

Thanks so much John I wanted to do a poem using alliteration and this seemed to flow so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 12/10/2015 9:35:00 AM

Wonderful musical poem, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/10/2015 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Eve I love writing with alliteration:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/25/2015 6:10:00 PM

Wonderful alliteration, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2015 6:13:00 PM

Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2015 2:53:00 AM

Jane, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love SKAT

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/21/2015 6:25:00 PM

Jan, congrats on your fine win my friend.... Very descriptive and wintry...A7

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 6:28:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/21/2015 4:34:00 PM

Oh yes! The beaty of winter is breathtaking! Congratulations on your top win Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Connie - it is so lovely to go back over old poems and see how far I have come since I started writing and joined the site only last year:-) hugs jan xx

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/20/2015 1:15:00 AM

This is lovely Jan: What a funtastic fancy of words. Best, SuZ

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2015 3:25:00 AM

Thanks Suz:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/7/2015 6:20:00 PM

Beautiful descriptive poem a 7 Hugs Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 6:26:00 PM

That is what I'm doing now trying to figure some of the forms Beautiful write

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 6:24:00 PM

Gosh Eve this is one of my oldies I was working hard on my alliteration and imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sharon Peeples

Date: 5/24/2015 6:08:00 PM

This is very nicely written!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/24/2015 6:09:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Sharon:-) Hugs jan xx

Hannah Stockwell

Date: 5/13/2015 4:24:00 PM

I love the alliteration. It just makes the poem seem so whimsical.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/13/2015 4:29:00 PM

Thanks so much for commenting on one of my poems from last year - I have written so many poems in a relatively short space of time it is lovely to read back on them:-) Hugs Jan xx