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SCINTILLATING SNOWFLAKES

Wintry white wisps wondrously whirl Soft sparkling snowflakes silently swirl Coolly carpeting countrysides carefully Dazzling diamonds dancing delightfully Submitted Contest forms A contest Sponsored by Broken Wings 28th December 2014

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Date: 8/5/2019 8:06:00 PM
Like the descriptive choice of words beginning with the same letter and reminds me when some of us would write coded poetry in my school days and have to break the code with the clue in the poem.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/6/2019 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Edmund I love using alliteration in some of my poems:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 2/9/2018 11:39:00 PM
A beauty. Charming poem, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/10/2018 3:44:00 AM
I love alliteration as a poetic device:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/16/2016 8:00:00 PM
I love the alliteration! Lovely evocation of winter. You even worked in a rhyme. A lot of emotion for four short lines. As usual I am a year late in commenting.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/17/2016 6:46:00 PM
Thanks so much John I am very fond of this particular poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/23/2016 6:07:00 PM
Hi Jan, congratulations on your win in the contest. Excellent alliteration Jan. I do love the snow and you have brought those snowflakes to life for me. I started to picture such a wondrous scene. Up to your usual standard Jan. Just reading this piece has cooled me down this evening. Wonderful. Always an honour to read Jan. This is a definite seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/24/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Mike I do love using alliteration and its so lovely to showcase older poems that rarely get read these days:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/23/2016 5:26:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, bl
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/24/2016 3:23:00 PM
Thanks so much BL:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/23/2016 5:13:00 PM
AWesome alliteration, my friend. BIG congrats
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/23/2016 5:15:00 PM
Thanks Andrea its so lovely to be able to showcase an old poem that rarely gets read any more:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/23/2016 1:26:00 PM
Jan, congratulations....Hope to see you stop by my blog *Female Spirit* always and forever ~Linda~
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/23/2016 1:39:00 PM
Many thanks Linda I love that poem for the imagery and alliteration:-) thanks for another great contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/27/2016 6:09:00 PM
Absolutely adore an awesome Allison alliteration... e-hugs ~ John W
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 7/15/2016 7:49:00 AM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/17/2016 11:44:00 PM
I loved the snowflake poem. It inspires me to do something like that myself. I liked the form and the thought that went into it. Wonderful.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/27/2016 4:34:00 PM
Thanks so much John I wanted to do a poem using alliteration and this seemed to flow so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/10/2015 9:35:00 AM
Wonderful musical poem, Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/10/2015 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Eve I love writing with alliteration:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/25/2015 6:10:00 PM
Wonderful alliteration, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/25/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/24/2015 2:53:00 AM
Jane, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:25:00 PM
Jan, congrats on your fine win my friend.... Very descriptive and wintry...A7
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2015 6:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Robert:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/21/2015 4:34:00 PM
Oh yes! The beaty of winter is breathtaking! Congratulations on your top win Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/21/2015 6:27:00 PM
Thanks Connie - it is so lovely to go back over old poems and see how far I have come since I started writing and joined the site only last year:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/20/2015 1:15:00 AM
This is lovely Jan: What a funtastic fancy of words. Best, SuZ
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/20/2015 3:25:00 AM
Thanks Suz:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/7/2015 6:20:00 PM
Beautiful descriptive poem a 7 Hugs Eve
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/7/2015 6:26:00 PM
That is what I'm doing now trying to figure some of the forms Beautiful write
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 8/7/2015 6:24:00 PM
Gosh Eve this is one of my oldies I was working hard on my alliteration and imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/24/2015 6:08:00 PM
This is very nicely written!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/24/2015 6:09:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by Sharon:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/13/2015 4:24:00 PM
I love the alliteration. It just makes the poem seem so whimsical.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 5/13/2015 4:29:00 PM
Thanks so much for commenting on one of my poems from last year - I have written so many poems in a relatively short space of time it is lovely to read back on them:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 3/8/2015 6:46:00 AM
Simple and realist...perfect...Peter
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/8/2015 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much Peter:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 3/3/2015 3:48:00 AM
That's a very happy poem. :) Julia
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/3/2015 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Julia:-) I was working hard on my alliteration:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/15/2015 7:42:00 PM
wonderful I love the pen of this poem
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/16/2015 2:24:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Ruth:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/2/2015 7:50:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Beautiful!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/2/2015 8:09:00 PM
Thanks Don I am so pleased with the way this turned out:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 1/2/2015 2:22:00 PM
A lovely write about winter's whimsy. It is one of my favorite seasons and this poem is just as wonderful, Jan! A fav for me :)
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/2/2015 2:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Kelly:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/31/2014 11:14:00 AM
Jan, what a lovely split second of time you gave me with this delicate poem! It's like living for a moment in a Thomas kinkade painting!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/31/2014 11:31:00 AM
Oh that is praise indeed! thank you so much for your wonderful comment:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/29/2014 12:55:00 PM
I love how you paint with snowflakes!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/29/2014 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Richard I enjoyed the challenge of writing this:-) Hugs jan xx
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