School of Bass At Lowell Ponds

Saw a school of
bass this cool morning
to small to catch yet,
but someday they will
land in someone's frying pan.

The pond where they live
is so murky but so far
they seem to be doing fine,
but the insects flying over
the pond, gives them plenty to eat.

wrote 7-11-07
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 5:59 AM
James – A blessing as always – YF4L – God Bless, MJ
Buys Avatar
July 24, 2008 at 4:10 PM
A case of eat and be eaten, lol. Great visuals and well written. Good one. Regards Heidie
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