School Closed

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wind blows snow falls knee - deep road sweep cold toes more clothes school closed snow day kids play hearts bloom sled zooms loud mirth well - worth warm hearth hot milk 2/16/2022 A Strand (1075) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/19/2022 4:19:00 PM

Hello Eve ... just the thought of snow makes me shiver as we don't see it here. Fine footle Eve. - thank you - Lindsay

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/17/2022 3:15:00 PM

This form is a classical form. Will try and find name for you. I also, like it Eve!!!))))) Pangie

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/17/2022 4:19:00 PM

FORM. IAMBIC MONOMETER I did one a while back. It was great fun! Pangie Not many done here at PS. I think they are great fun! Eve, you started a craze, I think, best wishes in the Contest! Pangie.))))

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/17/2022 3:33:00 PM

We get lot in new forms far too much. We think we areWill Shakespeare...or something. Baloney. Pangie

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/16/2022 2:24:00 PM

I really loved this. I want to know more about this form and try it. I always love snowfall but here, where I live, there's never one! But the poetry here brings that to me.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/17/2022 4:20:00 PM

Iambic monometer is the form. Pangie